undr, The Contributor

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Random Eternal Theory on 10/16/2018 6:01:12 PM

And? Sure you could use your school wifi or have a sibling on the forum who uses the same home wifi as you, but if you have the same ip as another user chances are you're the same person. As a matter of fact, End wrote that there was the possibility for you to be two different persons, but that you had to go into a good explanation for him to believe it. I understand very little of IT so I coul be wrong though.

Random Eternal Theory on 10/16/2018 5:48:07 PM

IP address I think.

Archaeology Thread on 10/14/2018 3:00:46 PM


1. Be pwned by mosquitoes

2. Gag vampires with rocks

3. ????

4. Profit!

This was the same malaria epidemic that stopped Attila's advance by the way.

A little favour on 10/14/2018 4:10:57 AM

I join Will in his call, Detective 1: Blacksea Island is a good mystery game and will take very little of your time to read. It's a shame to see it has only five ratings, and it certainly doesn't deserve to fade from the spotlight while 'How Gender Affects Your Life' keeps getting reviews and ratings for the lulz.

The Kingdom on 10/12/2018 7:23:00 AM

This was instructive.

Fiddling, Diddling and Supreme Court twiddling on 10/10/2018 1:35:31 PM

That's what people do before being raped.

On a serious note, he's a great fighter and I'd like to see the vermin who hit him in the back being pitted against him in a fight.

Fiddling, Diddling and Supreme Court twiddling on 10/10/2018 12:59:24 PM

Still, he was raped.

Scully’s Story ; ) on 10/8/2018 7:24:23 AM

Aww no

The Thirteeth Doctor on 10/8/2018 5:11:54 AM

Don't watch Dr Who and don't really care, but I'm glad the new doctor is good enough. I saw only a couple episodes with Tennant years ago (one was 'Don't Blink', I don't remember the other) so I can't say much.

Scully’s Story ; ) on 10/8/2018 2:42:17 AM

Is this an excerpt from a storygame you're writing? I hope it is because I want to know more about it. I thought I'd had enough of zombie survivals, but apparently a well-written one can still hook me. You said that you didn't revise the end but it seems alright to me, and the writing is solid (grammar included). I spotted just two minor typos: a missing opening quotation mark before 'Sorry, didn't mean to scare you' and 'through mine on' instead of threw. 

Sure, this isn't the most original subject, but you can still put your own spin on it. In fact, you've already done it by choosing this "military rookie who has to mass murder terrified civilians" POV.

If you intended this to be a short story well, it's still a good one but I really want the extended version.