unstableLoyalty, The Reader
This is a story about the world falling down around you, a somewhat young girl left to explore a land that even it's long lasting inhabitants don't understand..
What is a story without any characters? Well, why don't we find out? Yeah.. I need to stop asking questions when no one's around to answer them..
Recent PostsMy Story So Far? on 6/18/2017 1:30:31 PM
That's actually something I forgot to do, the character is supposed to be coming out of unconsciousness to find themself in a barren, cold place and they don't know why or where they are. So thank you for your feedback.
My Story So Far? on 6/18/2017 1:28:52 PM
Well, it's only the very beginning, and the point of it is to be confusing because you're waking up in a place to don't know and you don't know how you got there.
My Story So Far? on 6/17/2017 1:04:52 AM
There's not much, the only things I have in this story are the introduction and the first link, but what do you think? I had more but my computer crashed in the middle of writing and then I just got frustrated and kind of gave up. I'm heading to sleep now so I'd like to know what people think so far and I'll work on more tomorrow! :) http://chooseyourstory.com/story/tedium