Yo, y’all! How ya doin? I’m QuailHeart77 and I just wanted to explain myself. I posted uno storygames, a day in the life of a rich girl, which is sooo horrible. I am twelve and ain’t lost at mariokart to me brother and sister yet. (;
And pretty much half those words are author notes, even in some of the page titles.
To be honest, I hate my game and think it is horrible. Me and I and myself unanimously voted that it is horrible, and my next one will be so much better. I explored other story games more, and now I think I have got it. Feel free to beat up my game, or maybe choke it. Even better, make it have a long and horrible death, in which it is tortured!! JK (;
You can just unpublish it and polish it up later if you want to. Just take your time with one - have a plot in mind, spend more time developing your characters and setting the scene, edit it, and avoid putting author notes in the game itself.
If it helps, try drawing a basic map of the choices of the game on a piece of paper before you get to the actual writing.
Okey-Dokey will do!!!