So, I was sitting there, and there had been some ideas brewing in my head, and i just got so excited i had to share them:
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Lucid
So your a single dad and you have a 9 year old daughter. Your driving along, and then, BLAMMO! Dramatic car crash! the dad finds himself in a familiar world, but it's slightly tweaked too- in the most beautiful/disturbing ways. It turns out he's in a coma and that in fact, not in his own....he is stuck in his daughter's conscious! i thought this would be cool because i could play with perspective. Like, instead of the dad looking like "the real dad", he looks like himself in high school and he's in, a for say, marching band suit because he once showed his daughter a picture of him when he was in the high school marching band and thats the way she sees him now. Or like a scene where there is a coffin, and he finds his ex-wife inside. Thats because the girl believes her mother is dead, even though it has been explained to her that her mother actually left when she was very young. Cool, right? And the world is great and all, but slowly it begins to fall apart: In the real life, the girl is dying (her mind is still hanging on). So the dad has to escape WITHOUT his daughter. And i can just picture it: He wakes up, his dauhter is dead, but his face is totally stoned. The nurse is explaining how amazing it is that he survived without injury, but your daughter blablabla, and his face is still stoned....so it goes into his mind and it's like he's still kind of stuck in that world that died with his daughter, and he turns and walks away, and the nurse is like "wait!" but he keeps walking.... He walks straight into the middle of the road and he thinks its raining, but in reality its not, and if this where a movie, it would cut off right before he got hit by a car.
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Frame
So theres this guy, and he's pretty normal, except that when he was 12 he was discovered not knowing his name or pretty much anything. He got adopted and stuff, lives a normal life... and one day, he sees this hobo get hit by a car and die (OH NO THE CARSSSS). After that, he sees...things...like a woman everywhere. She's twenty or so, flickering (like frames in a movie) and black and white, and he sees her everywhere. So stuff happens, he tries to find out "why"...blablabla...he goes to an old movie theater and sees the movie, in black and white with the woman in it. FLASHBACK: he rememberssss! He was 12, running away from home, jumps a train. Meets this group of hobo boys (like17 ,16) and rides with them, the train makes a stop and the hobo boys run off some place for a bit... one guy leaves behind his jacket, which has some money in it. The guy takes the money and goes to see a movie, and it's OF COURSE the black and white one with the girl, and he meets a cute girl and buys some food, goes back to the train and hopes that the one guy wont notice the missing money...WRONG. He gets the crap beat out of him, jumps off the train and blablalbla, ya know, loses memory. It turns out that the hobo that got hit by a car is the hobo that beat him up. So now with his memory regained, he tracks back to his home where he finds his father before the old man dies. More details, of course.
So i shared these with my sis, and she told me they where weird and stupid. I like them, but then again, i like a lot of things. I was wondering if these where things i should pursue writing, and if you have any suggestions, please, say em.