Player Comments on a big fight!!!

hey dumb ppl :P, i have left this stupid site because the only thing ppl have said to me is how bad my story-games are :(
but if you were kind enough to see through that bad spelling and how short they are you -would- realize that I only did this 'site' because i thought 'you ppl' would be kind and welcoming, but of course no :-#.

all you have been is rude,mean,horrible,unhelpful and a taint crazy :)


so i know your remarks off this comment would probbly be "good, bye" or something like "we won't miss ya!" or something more unkind that i shall not speak of :V


so see you my unfriendly ppl and i shall never EVER EVER go on this site again :) bye

and truthfully i WON'T miss you :D
(i have found a much better site named 'wattpad' and 'bryniel warrior cats role-play)

-stormstar292

This story MUST be deleted because it's dumb.

No...Just No...

("Slightly," Will? xD Just 'slightly'?)

Stormstar, I'm disappointed. I even told you how to spell "psycho" and "maniac" AND my name (which is ... right here, dude, right here, attached to this comment,) and you're still not fixing any of your mistakes.

I am glad I got to "fihgt" that no good "mainack" Kiel_Farren :D The spelling on this needs to be fixed with a spell-checker and Kiel has actually recently written a slightly longer and slightly... deeper story-game that you might enjoy reading :)

Well, I've learnt a valuable lesson today... If I beat the shit out of a kid infront of loads of people, I'll become really popular! Yey! ^_^

This must be a troll. Fix your grammar.

Wow, you've made literally no improvements.

awesome

brilliant won again!!!(with different answers) BOOM!

wow you go girl whooop whoop

How come in the description the bully is named "keil_farren," but there is no mention of him in the story?

I know that Karate Kid was kind of pushing it with the whole, "All of your problems can be solved with fair and honorable violence!" but, honestly, even that had better logic than the shit I just read.

Why are there so many terrible stories on this site now?

This is oddly short and full of spelling mistakes. I always go through some good and bad points however this really was just very very short and full of errors.

This story taught me how to defend myself properly, I now know exactly what I have to do in a fight situation. I feel extremely grateful to the author who inspired me to become a professional thumb wrestler. gg stormstar292 gg.

Do they not teach children grammar in school anymore? Kindergarten teachers worldwide are rolling in their graves.

Please, unpublish this and at least have someone proofread it before you put it back out here.

short, dumb and full of typos

Hmm, I wonder who the hell "keil_farren" is. :P

Look, kid, I really don't care if you're going to write a story about me or dedicate one to me, it's actually kind of hilarious, but at least learn to spell, please. This isn't any better than the last two you posted.