Player Comments on A Hero's Odyssey

I like where the story is going. It has good detail and I like that the character has a good amount of speaking roles. The only thing I want to point out though is that you should explain some things in detail more. You seem to be a fan of Greek mythology but I am not so some things were a little confusing. If you fix that then I think the next one will be better. Nice job.
-- JMgskills on 12/17/2011 4:18:29 PM with a score of 0
It was good but not enoughchoices.This story is the best I have read on this sit And that says a lot cause I tend to find the books on this site boring.
So thank you
-- Rose Olympus on 9/24/2019 10:26:30 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good
-- etrow5 on 8/12/2019 8:26:52 PM with a score of 0
I felt like I was enticed by the sirens in this gamestory as I played this for my third time lol
-- Kuro on 3/31/2019 12:40:58 PM with a score of 0
Mediocre retelling of the Odyssey, except it's framed as a new guy repeating Odysseus' adventure verbatim (which makes no sense). Very linear story with little value as a CYOA. If you want to learn about this period, just read a translation of the actual story instead.
-- Vingle on 12/19/2018 2:15:23 PM with a score of 0
Nice work! As a fan of Greek mythology I can say this is VERY accurate. Well done!
-- Wolflove on 6/25/2018 9:09:33 PM with a score of 0
Great for a train journey! Thanks for the story!
-- Ralph & George on 5/7/2018 11:51:06 AM with a score of 0
Not Bad... I think I chose the wrong branch in the story that's why it was "The End" for me so so soon. Thank you very much and please do continue making exciting mythological stories. :)
-- yezster on 4/21/2018 1:17:38 AM with a score of 0
This storygame is perfect.I loved it.My favourite story is the Odyssey."Tell me, o Muse, of that ingenious man, who traveled far and wide, after he was spoken to by the gods themselves."It was fascinating.Nice writing,amazing effort.
-- ToughPenelope on 3/23/2018 3:09:14 AM with a score of 0
very adventurous and cool
-- mvery on 12/13/2017 6:46:17 PM with a score of 0
"My dear Calypso, by the immortal gods I vow that my heart is filled with love for you. Please, let me live here, by your side so that we may be happy together, until the end of time itself"
-- blackcigarette on 12/11/2017 9:14:00 AM with a score of 0
thank you. NAPM
-- Laila on 12/10/2017 1:54:17 PM with a score of 0
I like this game because it 's an education game and its fun for everyone to.
-- Sam on 11/25/2017 6:53:07 PM with a score of 0
So exciting ??
-- Omg on 11/25/2017 8:03:53 AM with a score of 0
I think this story is AWESOME because it teaches you about ancient Greece.
-- Josie on 10/28/2017 2:38:18 AM with a score of 0
Loved this story. Im a huge fan of greek mythology and this just brought it to life. I like the references to Odysseus. Just a great story in all
-- nm13757 on 10/21/2017 5:37:35 PM with a score of 0
8/8, like the description for the rating says, it will bring you enlightenment
-- Shinsou_Hitoshi on 10/17/2017 8:47:22 PM with a score of 0
nice
-- mrawesomer4 on 10/13/2017 5:36:42 PM with a score of 0
Could be better if there were MORE endings available. But guess you can't change history by joining Greek and Sparta through marriage? ;)
-- TestingJest on 8/24/2017 4:32:50 AM with a score of 0
very good
-- irfanzxx on 8/19/2017 6:11:35 PM with a score of 0
Wow! Great work! I'm a huge fan of Greek history and mythology, so this just made my days. By the gods, thank you for this chance! ;)
-- Kai on 8/9/2017 2:34:16 AM with a score of 0
emotional
-- boi on 8/7/2017 6:26:26 PM with a score of 0
sehr gut
-- Bruha12 on 6/4/2017 1:37:12 PM with a score of 0
The hallmark of a good story is that even though it has some length, you're sad when it ends. Great job. I was a little torn between the parallels to The Oddyssey, but in the end I thought it was well done.
-- Tyrannosaurusrex on 5/2/2017 7:05:21 PM with a score of 0
Good taste...

This was just nice. A STORYgame with a good storyplot, not-too -long length and many details.

I really like how Greek mythology is used here. If one analyzes enough this story seems to be a version of the story of Odysseus...

All in all you made me spend all my cents here. 6/8.
-- AgentX on 3/8/2017 7:51:51 AM with a score of 0
A good story but I wish the characters were a bit more fleshed out.
-- Guest on 2/21/2017 3:03:06 PM with a score of 0
I noticed three spelling mishaps but that didn't inhibit the reading very much, beautifully done.
-- Multiverse on 2/18/2017 10:33:10 AM with a score of 0
I totally loved the story,it was not too long nor too short. I've been on this site for nearly 2 yrs as a guest and i have played many story games. still,this story can be called a 'masterpiece'and you(the author)should be an author if you are not. oh,and i am a hardore fan of percy jackson and the heroes of olympus series,so it was natural for me to develop an affection just by reading the title.hope my coment helped....
-- utkarshpokemonmaster on 12/31/2016 12:58:34 PM with a score of 0
i will say it, made me happy to read it again, for almost 20 times
-- deadshot117 on 11/6/2016 3:16:58 PM with a score of 0
It was good, I liked the fighting scene.
-- VicMars14 on 5/5/2016 3:59:29 PM with a score of 0
Oops... I probably should have blocked when arrows shot at me instead of lying flat on the ground.. Gonna have to try that again.
-- CurseOfTime on 3/26/2016 5:45:33 PM with a score of 0
This is a really awesome story and I hope you write more things.
-- corgi213 on 8/28/2015 7:22:29 PM with a score of 0
Really good, I was really into it, but it had a lot of annoying spelling errors! They really took me out of the moment. Seize =/= cease!
-- Imrah on 6/5/2015 1:06:51 AM with a score of 0
I loved how it was so in-tune with mythology!
-- djman3420 on 6/3/2015 12:31:43 PM with a score of 0
Love the parallel to Odysseus. The story was well-written and I felt that it was neither too short nor too long. Awesome story.
-- Yo5h on 2/22/2015 5:55:08 PM with a score of 0
That. Was. Awesome! I Don't See How That Could Be Better. Maybe Next Time You Make A Game, And You Get Items, Health, That Kind Of Thing. This Deserves A Trophy, If I Could Give Them. A 8/8 Is The Best I Can Do, And I Will Keep On Looking Forwards For More!
-- CaelanD on 1/20/2015 7:52:37 AM with a score of 0
This was a great story took me long enough to read the whole story
-- Farsah on 12/23/2014 7:35:12 PM with a score of 0
It was a well thought out story, but it was extremely boring and I was unable to find enjoyment. There also could have been more depth and more choices.
-- al7321 on 12/6/2014 3:51:54 PM with a score of 0
A great story. It's a pleasure to read something written with passion and commitment from the author. Engaging tale, just about right for length too. Well done.
-- Jordi P on 11/7/2014 12:52:21 PM with a score of 0
Really good, amusing and clever. My only suggestions are diverge a little from the oddesey. Other than that: awesome!
-- Aramis on 7/21/2014 8:52:48 PM with a score of 0
This is a VERY educational storygame. And wow, I like the plot and the way you put in everything was cool... I love Greek Mythology!
-- Zephyrme2847 on 4/8/2014 7:03:29 AM with a score of 0
It feels like you're directly engaging in the story. It is definitely more "story" than "game", but the way that this story weaves so intricately into The Odyssey is amazing. I learned some new stuff about Greek mythology as well while playing the game.
-- Allusional on 4/4/2014 9:21:42 PM with a score of 0
Cool,
-- EarthCollision on 2/23/2014 2:11:36 PM with a score of 0
Great story! I love Greek mythology, and you managed to make me love it even more.
-- Warhammerfan on 2/5/2014 2:58:58 AM with a score of 0
Good game, I recommend it to everyone
-- Claw2k11 on 12/31/2013 10:42:34 AM with a score of 0
The Odyssey all over, I didn't like the Odyssey much, or epic poetry in general (execpt Beowulf)
-- Kwism1127 on 8/27/2013 4:20:00 PM with a score of 0
Well, since this story is based upon the Odyssey, you could situate this story around 1200 B.C, during the time Myceneans. Assuming that Lycurgus even existed, the Sparta in this story is long before Lycurgus was born ;)
-- Romulus on 4/19/2013 11:36:48 AM with a score of 0
A noble spartiate will never be caught using the bow, assuming this is post-lycurgus sparta. The spartans did employ mercenary archers and had non-spartan commoners from the countryside trained in archery.
-- Aigre on 4/18/2013 10:02:53 PM with a score of 0
Cool and fast paced. 8/8!!!
-- Endrew on 4/8/2013 1:50:19 AM with a score of 0
THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!! 8/8
-- Mercedes on 2/27/2013 10:21:00 PM with a score of 0
Took me a few times to get but now I do. It's like the Odyssey repeat quite a few year's later.
-- hugo23 on 2/18/2013 10:36:10 PM with a score of 0
Great game
-- EragonMax490 on 2/14/2013 2:45:48 PM with a score of 0
Very interestingly done; I recognized a lot of elements of the Odyssey, but you still maintained your own story.
-- MagmaArmor0 on 2/14/2013 12:14:07 AM with a score of 0
stock knowledge of Greek myth helped. good game :]
-- toni on 2/11/2013 8:52:06 PM with a score of 0
I really liked it. I love history and mythology, so I'm a little biased, but I think it's well written and entertaining. 8/8
-- Claudius on 2/1/2013 6:11:26 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely amazing story, but the spelling errors take away the professional aspect of the piece. Thanks for the awesome story!
-- Anonymousse on 1/22/2013 3:40:51 PM with a score of 0
Finally finished reading it! It's an interesting story, not really my thing but well written. I liked how you used the archaic kinda words. Some spelling and grammar error on the whazoo, but I guess that's inevitable in a long story. I've given it a 7/8.
-- Anyman on 1/21/2013 4:28:39 PM with a score of 0
i really liked it! You incorporated many of the plot elements of the Odyssey, but also managed to give your own twist to the story. There are some spelling and grammar errors, but they did not distract from the story. All in all: good job!
-- Odysseus on 1/21/2013 7:54:29 AM with a score of 0
I loved it! Your way of putting the story is good and i like how ,since some of us don't know much about Greek mythology you gave the option for us to learn more about it so that we would understand the story. Can't wait until the rest is published!
-- SEULaw on 2/24/2012 5:03:18 AM with a score of 0
Can't wait for the rest!
-- Folygon on 2/20/2012 7:59:05 PM with a score of 0
The story so far is very good. I like how you maintained an elevated tone throughout. The individual scenes could a little more detail. Of course, these comments only apply to the path I chose and might not apply to the story as a whole.
-- A. Iulius on 2/14/2012 7:49:10 PM with a score of 0
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