After the End

Player Rating4.20/8

"#283 overall, #30 for 2012"
based on 183 ratings since 09/10/2012
played 1,860 times (finished 182)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

My first story. A zombie apocalypse. Criticism of the constructive sort is greatly appreciated. :) Please tell me what you think!

 

2 weeks after the end of the world you find yourself out of food. You've been holed up in your apartment by yourself- it's time to go out and face it.

If your ending doesn't say 'Hooray!' then you should try again. 

Player Comments

Hooray! I reached the good ending!
-- Jaiden James Samples on 3/17/2019 10:36:40 PM with a score of 0
The description of the story makes it seem like it has at least a moderate amount of endings but it only has 3 death, master, and complex
-- L0garithmSt0rys on 1/26/2019 4:26:13 PM with a score of 0
I would rate it higher if things didn't end so abruptly.

SPOILER ALERT: Who's Master? Why is she stuttering.

A creepy story could follow this further; it's a good setup.
-- Quorrah on 9/15/2018 6:23:33 PM with a score of 0
I have played several zombie story games on this site. I have read some that were excellent and some that were REALLY bad. This was enjoyable. The writing was done well, but I have to say I kind of was just getting started, and then it abruptly ended. Not much resolution or hope for the future. If that was your intention- to kind of leave us in the zombie emergency state at the conclusion of the story, I am curious as to the thought behind that. It feels as though you just got tired of putting more pages into it.
Nevertheless, well done! Solid middle rating.
-- LuvLee on 7/28/2018 12:55:33 PM with a score of 0
i LOVED IT
-- naan on 4/29/2018 10:16:55 PM with a score of 0
Guess I'm a biker boy now. But in all seriousness, it was really good.
-- MrPikmin16 on 7/9/2017 4:11:05 PM with a score of 0
And the compound is ran by a dictator army captain, and he and his cadre fight the civilians for control of the compound, this of course after the general collapse of the chain of command, society, and supply lines, but the civvies outnumber them, overtake the military at the compound, and set up a communal life...The true story awaits.
-- crusader on 7/3/2016 2:56:35 PM with a score of 0
i got hurray! at the end but unfortunately the photo at the end is apparently "no longer available"???
-- thebigE on 4/24/2016 8:29:14 AM with a score of 0
This was actually pretty good
-- AthenaT on 5/17/2015 11:19:51 PM with a score of 0
Yay! I got the best ending! I usually don't even like zombie games, but this has inspired me to read some more zombie stuff.
-- Bolt78625 on 5/2/2015 11:25:50 AM with a score of 0
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