Break and Enter

Player Rating3.54/8

"#573 overall, #43 for 2017"
based on 70 ratings since 01/13/2017
played 632 times (finished 85)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Welcome to the interactive adventure to orient youth to the process of Restorative Justice! Guide your character as you break into a neighbor's garage to steal some beer and then deal with the consequences. Your mission is to successfully navigate the through important decisions and learn the secret word that proves you've completed this orientation. 

Best of luck!

Player Comments

I enjoyed it.

You put a good amount of effort into this, and for that I applaud you. The writing wasn't linear at most points, although at a few pages I noticed there were a few illogical situations.

You had character development here, and that's always nice. I felt like the way you described emotion with the characters was rather cliche, but hey at least it's there.

Some paths no doubt had more effort put into them than others, you need to work on making sure the quality doesn't spread thin in your writing, or it will seem lazy.

In some branches, I thoroughly enjoyed myself and found this to be a really good storygame about realistic situations.

I loved the humor in here, and while it was in small portions, it made me laugh.

Also, your proofreading could use work. I saw spelling and grammatical errors within some pages, and that needs to be fixed.

4/8, good work, but there's room for improvement.
-- MinnieKing on 6/10/2017 4:35:40 PM with a score of 0
im innocent i swear

it was a setup
look i didnt really steal it
i just borrowed it
my friends tol dme to do it
it was reily
get him
i can find him for you
i swear
lets make a deal
OBJECTION
-- the beer burglar on 2/2/2021 9:03:17 PM with a score of 0
Oh my gosh this is so irritating, ive played many times, this is a story, not a Choose the right thing to do book, its a story game, and every ending, whether i got to the third page or the 7th always ended up with me on cot
-- Liqquitty on 7/2/2019 10:34:32 AM with a score of 0
Was okay i guess, pretty short, and seemed a bit thrown together
-- Liqquitty on 7/2/2019 10:28:12 AM with a score of 0
The storygame was fun. I like that it had a good lesson.
-- Faervel on 11/28/2018 5:52:44 PM with a score of 0
" The secret word you need to remember is: "Meow"
"

Meow?
-- TestingJest on 9/21/2017 11:40:01 PM with a score of 0
This story seems to capture the feelings of an unthoughtful person turned criminal. But it would be nice with some more backstory on the main character and some more description.
-- WizzyCat on 1/25/2017 9:56:12 PM with a score of 0
What is the "secret word" even supposed to be for? There isn't anywhere to use it!
-- FrustratedReader on 1/19/2017 9:59:04 AM with a score of 0
I just wanted to say meow. I really liked this story. I personally have never been in trouble with the law before but it's interesting to see what kinds of things can happen when a teenager commits a misdemeanor. The writing was very clear and precise. Thank you for a well written, informative story.
-- Orange on 1/18/2017 12:25:40 AM with a score of 0
Addendum: I now realize that it says "like a dog", not "for a dog". Please ignore that bit
-- Malkalack on 1/16/2017 1:33:09 AM with a score of 0
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