Can u get through
Mystery / Puzzle
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"trek through the forest"
"Make sure not to blink"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
One way out many ways to die, can u remember and Get Out
Really short and possibly pointless
on 6/11/2015 3:24:50 PM
Yay! I won!
on 6/11/2015 2:41:04 PM
The fact that you state in the description that this game is "possibly pointless" just tells me you weren't planning on putting any effort into this in the first place. Terrible grammar mixed in with a non-existent plot, this doesn't even deserve a 1. It deserves a 0 - as in it isn't even worth my time.
When you come onto a writing site, you should atleast respect it enough to integrate a decent amount of effort into your writings. Writing horribly without the intention to improve not only wastes our time, but yours as well.
on 6/11/2015 4:47:44 AM
This was short and not very interesting. You spelt quite a lot of words wrong and didn't use correct grammar or punctuation. There was no plot or detail to the pages, and it was all guesswork. There weren't even clues to discover what was right, and it was extremely linear. Besides, if you yourself say its pointless and boring, why publish it?
on 6/10/2015 11:11:32 PM
It's even worse than WC games.
on 6/10/2015 2:45:35 PM
If you call your own game pointless and bad shouldn't you take the time to make it better?
on 6/10/2015 8:44:30 AM
... What did I just read?
on 6/10/2015 6:25:32 AM
Another story with random deaths at every corner. . .
This can't even be considered a game or a story. Much less a storygame! This could've been made way better if it had a plot, a theme, and characters.
on 6/10/2015 2:05:36 AM
Wow..... Why publish this if even YOU think it's pointless?
on 6/9/2015 10:39:54 PM
I wouldn't describe falling as a "slow descent". Also, there are no hints as to the right path. It's all guessing.
on 6/9/2015 9:14:26 PM
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