Cat's Day

Player Rating3.39/8

"#725 overall, #60 for 2012"
based on 404 ratings since 01/02/2012
played 4,225 times (finished 424)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

This is my first game. I am just using this game to get used to the game making features.

 

Author's note:

1. This is based on my grouchy Bengal cat, Neko (japanese for cat, creative right. I am an anime fan, so it pretty much explains the name

2. All the endings are the same, but like I said this is just a test.

Player Comments

A warning. I am going to start bitching about a lot of things, that have to do with what a cat does.

Normally, a stereotypical cat wouldn’t be going around chasing squirrels. That is something the stereotypical dog does. Now, I am not saying that not something that a cat may do, but as a cat person, I can tell you that that is not what most cats do.

Now actual constructive criticism: One of your first choices was to eat and drink, without the owner being awake. Maybe you should go into the variables and mess around with that to make sure you only can eat and/or drink after the owner is up. Secondly, your story was short. Extremely short. A little descriptive writing would be nice, but still was very rushed. Third, your grammar could use a lot of work. And don’t be shy to ask for help! There are a lot of people you can PM that would help you fix your grammar. Overall, a 3/8.
-- The_Broken_God on 4/28/2019 7:40:53 PM with a score of 0
This is another nice little story, but it really needs a little proofreading. There are a number of different errors on the first page including word use, typographic errors, and tense errors. I do like that there are choices in the story, though the first page might be labeled something other than “The First Page,” especially since there’s an option to go there in the story itself. The your vs you’re error shows up more than once as well throughout the story. That’s a painful error to read.

The story itself has lots of potential and is a neat little story. I like the options that you have as a cat, they make sense and are fun. Yes, they do all lead to the same ending, and that makes for quite a short little story, but it still works, generally. I just think each page could be enhanced with a few more details about what your cat is seeing and doing. There could be a lot more information about everything from the smell of the other cats to the chase of the squirrel. A nice little story, though, thank you for sharing it with the site.
-- Ogre11 on 7/29/2018 6:38:56 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, but it wasn't the best.

The writing was pretty good, but it wasn't very well fleshed out due to a lack of detail and branching. It was very short, and I think there were about two actual "choices" that led to another page, but I suppose that's what i'd expect since it has one ending.

There were a few grammar/spelling errors, such as "til" instead of "till." Errors like this make me feel like this was really lazy since it was so short, and a story as short as this should be easy to proofread.

It was cute in a way, but the emotion really didn't hit me until the last page, which seemed to have a lot of effort put in while other pages seemed written very quickly.

It feels like it was written in a day, honestly. I guess it's not easy writing a very long story about a cats home life, but that's just an opportunity for you to be creative! :D

3/8.
-- MinnieKing on 3/10/2017 6:50:39 PM with a score of 0
I don't like it,when you get outside you can only do one thing without getting lost and ending the game
-- horsegirl610 on 4/1/2020 11:21:26 PM with a score of 0
Lots of loops taking you back to previous menus, often perplexingly so. Once I saw "Your on your owner's bed" I was deeply skeptical, and I was right to be so.
-- Gower on 4/28/2019 12:57:17 PM with a score of 0
Spelling and grammar errors, my english teacher would kill you.
-- Bob on 1/30/2019 9:19:28 PM with a score of 0
This was a nice simple short story and I enjoyed reading it. There were a couple spelling and grammar errors (Your and You're) and a few inconsistencies. For example you said the food was 4 hours old, yet the owner hadn't even got out of bed yet which suggests that the food was put out in the middle of the night by some unknown character. Maybe I'm overthinking it!
These things can easily be spotted from a quick proof read and considering how short this was it wouldn't be too difficult to do.
-- tjwilliams555 on 1/25/2018 3:28:50 PM with a score of 0
Short, not much detail till the last page. 3/8
-- ChaosBearer on 12/26/2017 8:06:18 PM with a score of 0
It was a very creative story and I was thrilled to see that there wasn't any warrior cats in it.I would really like to see a story that contains warrior cats for some inspiration and motivation. And to be amused of course! I hope there is a part two!!
-- Th33moC4t on 9/18/2017 1:28:14 PM with a score of 0
It's a little short, and I feel as if it would be improved with a bit more length on it and more than one ending, but since it's your cat, it kind of makes sense you didn't add multiple. 5/8
-- LilytheMoonCat on 7/14/2017 8:53:25 PM with a score of 0
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