Dead Inside

a Modern by QingBo

Player Rating?/8

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Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length?/8

"Unknown / Not Set"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

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Life is so vanilla lately.

What did those faceless men and women ever do for you...

Their cruelty has hurt you so many times...

Never again.

How well will you adapt to the new environment?

Written for the Tiny 'topias Jam.

Player Comments

wow
-- Kytty on 6/6/2020 1:37:13 PM with a score of 0
Given the constraints of the "Tiny 'Topia Jam," this isn't half bad. Each page provides a little nugget of information, leaving enough room to string out a narrative of sorts over multiple branches.

Reading the story, however, inspired several questions:

1) Does the current pandemic really count as a "dystopia"? I suppose it could...

2) If people are reaching the conclusion that the population needs to be culled over toilet paper, then why fret over a deadly virus in the first place?

3) Poisonous wild potatoes...?
-- Bill_Ingersoll on 5/18/2020 12:31:49 PM with a score of 0
Really good work, Max! I really enjoyed the different choices you set, the Covid reference was pretty realistic, I had fun toggling with the choices seeing what do I achieve. Overall, awesome work!
-- Himank Ghosh on 5/18/2020 12:02:36 PM with a score of 0
Enjoyed it. Great pace. Good writing. I liked the "visual" style.
-- Harsha on 5/16/2020 6:48:28 PM with a score of 0
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