"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 151 times (finished 23)
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
An unrepentant criminal tries to dodge his former associates after a weapons deal goes wrong. My entry for EndMaster's Edgelord Contest 2. I literally only wrote this to avoid SHAME so don't expect anything too great.
This story-game is very frantic. That is meant in a positive way, as it's written well, and while it is indeed short, there's more than two or three ways that it can end when all is said and done.
If it was just a tad longer, this would feel like one of those extended thrillers of a movie, or multiple scenes of said hypothetical movie. As it stands now, it's an intense story where the main character does some morally questionable things in the name of their unrepentant survival.
Nice work, Chris.
on 2/7/2021 1:51:12 AM with a score of 0
Damn, bro. Why you gotta tease us with excellent writing in such a short, rushed game. I suppose I could just take the game for what it is, but it leaves me wanting more. This bit, though enjoyable, would be more effective with more depth and context.
on 1/31/2021 10:58:34 AM with a score of 0
Always a cool idea to explore a few pathways that can lead to a continuation or a sought after death. I liked the bit of the story both included and excluded.
on 1/30/2021 6:30:26 PM with a score of 0
Decent little action scene, gauntlet style. Writing and story were good, just short. It was entertaining though and would fit well in a larger story.
on 1/30/2021 4:24:42 PM with a score of 0
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