Dream Forest

Player Rating?/8

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based on 6 ratings since
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Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

The two most incompetent people in the army, Raleph and Daniel, have been sent on an emergency field mission in the forest to investigate a mysterious, possibly dangerous being that Raleph finds himself strangely drawn to. Just who is she, and how is she connected to this military nobody?

Content warnings/Maturity: The protagonist commits suicide in one ending, if you want to avoid this ending the exact combination of choices that leads to it is (highlight it) Listen to Daniel talk, Follow her, 

In addition to the suicide ending, there are some descriptions that contain a lot of negative and discouraging thoughts as the protagonist has lost meaning in life. Perhaps not a clinically accurate depiction of depression, but still pretty similar.

There is implied genital mutilation but it is not described in detail.

It mentions sex and stuff but nothing really graphic. So if you could look at the image on the Succubus Contest post, you should be fine.

Difficulty: You can "lose" by getting some early endings, but most of the time there are only 2 different choices so it's also pretty easy to get the "good" ending(s). There are a total of 5 endings NOPE 2. will update later.

Player Comments

This story was interesting. It didn't have a great start, but about midway through it started to get good. Unfortunately, it ended not too long after it started feeling like the story was going somewhere. Another gripe I had was there was quite a few one choice pages. I understand that this was probably do to time constraints but its just something that tends to bug me a bit in CYOA stories. Overall, it had a lot of potential but it seemed to stop before things really got started. It did have an interesting ending however. Nice work.
-- TurnipBandit on 7/31/2019 1:04:19 PM with a score of 0
This one seems a bit rudderless at first, but once you finally get knocked out it starts resembling a more standard story. There isn't much description of the environment or world exploration by the character, but it has nice reversal of what I assume is the standard expectation of main character perspective.

The highlight is probably the symmetry between the realms in this story. My ending was the one where you meet your dream.

It's an interesting concept, but I feel like a lot of story was left in the ether here.

One thing I'm curious about... what is "obviously styled" hair?
-- Fluxion on 7/31/2019 4:43:43 AM with a score of 0
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