If You're Bored

Player Rating1.87/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 27 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

You are bored, so you play this game. Why don't you clikc, click, clikc and see what it's all about then? (oh yeah, and this is my first storygame... I'm a total NOOB expert *cough cough*.)

Player Comments

my fan theory:so....then the unicorn went crazy and started turning people into mannequins, causing a ripple in time that caused the protagonist to look for something she already found.....
-- corgi213 on 1/18/2016 2:51:08 AM
Click is spelled C-L-I-C-K. ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 1/15/2016 1:43:51 PM
I really just want to copy paste Steve's comment here, especially since he double posted already.

But everything he had to say hit the mark. Don't release your story in parts. No need to type out the choices in the text. Stories predicated entirely on randomness are almost always bad. Crossing out words can be a useful tool if used sparingly in certain areas. You went way overboard, and the page just looked rather sloppy. Check out the Writing Workshop for writing drills and the Help and Info section for story advice and writing tips.
-- Bucky on 1/15/2016 1:00:55 PM
So, firstly you don't need to list out the choices before actually leaving the links.
Secondly, this game isn't finished. One of the most important things that should be learned is a game should never be put out in parts, especially this short.
Finally, there was very little internal consistency. I have no idea what the plot of what I just played was. Someone called me, I went to an Atic, there was some weird unicorn, I don't know. There wasn't really much to enjoy here, and it wasn't funny enough to justify it's weirdness.
-- Steve24833 on 1/15/2016 12:47:19 PM
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