In School Suspension

Player Rating4.07/8

"#395 overall, #32 for 2014"
based on 214 ratings since 10/17/2014
played 3,591 times (finished 283)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

Tags

Humor

Well good going, you just couldn't keep your cellphone away yesterday and you wound up in ISS (in school suspension). The good old days of being sent home to your video games are over; you're going to sit in room with your high school's degenerates for seven hours and suffer. Unless...

Player Comments

Hey, this was actually pretty funny. I must tip my hat off to you in making such a humorous storygame that can be described as 'random' but that wasn't much of a issue as the story was written very well and the presentation was rather solid.

Grammar and punctuation wise, this story did quite well on that front as well. I also enjoyed the premise of being a degenerate of sorts, it was able to provide many scenes that offered plenty of laughs to be had.

My only complaint is that some of the choices didn't really matter, as the story would progress the same regardless of the choice that was chosen, this was also a bit short length wise too. I wouldn't of minded having a longer storygame to read through, because it certainly would've been fun to experience more.

As the storygame is now, it's only rather decent. Obviously in a technical sense, this shines, but this storygame almost lacks too much to truly make it satisfying in the end.

Choices are rather important, and I felt like I was reading a very funny storygame rather than playing one, if that makes any sense.

Still, this was funny and it made me laugh. So thanks for the rather fascinating read.
-- TharaApples on 1/19/2017 11:12:26 PM with a score of 0
Okay, but too short.
-- 325boy on 5/10/2019 6:00:43 AM with a score of 0
A fine story indeed. Didn't make it too far, got booted out for attempting to do homework, but I enjoyed my time nonetheless.

I enjoyed the execution of the premise and the main character the most.
-- Ringo Huadingo on 4/15/2019 1:23:29 PM with a score of 0
Kinda vague but like the "You get killed by a spinning pen" part (=
-- AUAKSA on 5/17/2018 9:47:39 PM with a score of 0
Yeah as if I even care but it was pretty amazing
-- Moana on 2/17/2018 10:43:45 AM with a score of 0
Short, snappy, and witty. Definitely worth every cent.
-- Keelo_Ron on 1/3/2018 2:00:01 AM with a score of 0
Really funny, it made my day.
-- malachi on 11/5/2017 6:08:27 PM with a score of 0
Great game!
-- Missle0945 on 9/4/2017 9:17:04 PM with a score of 0
I actually kinda liked it :)
-- Charmeleon on 12/17/2016 5:19:15 PM with a score of 0
It is okay lacks choices
-- Tr3yofakind on 12/15/2016 11:51:03 AM with a score of 0
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