Player Rating2.91/8

"#604 overall, #58 for 2011"
based on 200 ratings since 06/29/2011
played 3,814 times (finished 202)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.


This is a game where you choose if you go to college, what job you want, if you are going to get a significant other ,and how hard you work. There is no certain gender in this game. You can be a girl or boy if you want. I hope that makes sense. Anyways, will you succeed? This is only my second game, my first game wasn't a hit. But I'm trying again! Thanks for playing!(:

Player Comments

I'd like to say I enjoyed myself, but this may have been the worst story i've read in a while.

Ok, listen, I understand the occasional "your," and "you're," screw up and maybe a few misspelled words throughout a storygame, but the grammar in this was horrible. Come on, did you even try? There was even a link that had an exclamation mark, with a comma and a space before it. Grammar matters.

Also, you screwed up with the branching. In one path, you can barely try, but somehow you still end up having a ton of money. Many paths led to the same ending.

Transitions were choppy, and sloppy. Neither of those words are good, as silly as they sound when used in a sentence together. You were pretty much saying a sentence, then somehow leap to another sentence with almost no relation to the other. That's not how you write a good storygame. It makes it very linear.

Character development was almost nonexistant. Work harder on your plot, branching, spelling, characters, and effort.

-- MinnieKing on 5/10/2017 9:16:27 PM
Decent, but much too short.
-- HappyPaws on 5/21/2018 7:26:05 PM
needs slightly longer track and items
-- tyree on 4/19/2018 1:56:10 PM
-- billy on 3/16/2018 9:41:21 PM
-- Kill_For_Sport on 4/24/2017 3:38:46 PM
Cute, short story.
-- Quorrah on 1/23/2017 6:28:44 PM
its strangely short but its a good time waster
-- Feromount on 1/19/2017 6:14:39 PM
Cool, should be longer
-- Voltage on 11/28/2016 7:40:54 PM
That was really short.
-- annaisawesome on 7/15/2016 11:12:00 AM
A bit too short. Way tooo short
-- Jenniece on 6/2/2016 10:18:48 PM
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