Love Triangle

This was a rather fascinating love story.

While the premise is certainly interesting, I can't say that the presentation of this was the best. There were numerous amounts of typos that were present in this story, and pages that lacked much in terms of text. I couldn't really see a reason as to why I should pick one love interest over the other, because both didn't really seem to do much in terms of standing out to me.

The romance in this just didn't feel very genuine, and the girls had their moments of being somewhat horrifying. I mean, wanting to kill themselves or the reader at times, but I guess that was supposed to make a point that love makes most people insane, or drives them to do crazy things.

Anyway, my advice would be to better proofread your story for grammatical errors and slip ups. Also learn how to flesh out your characters more and make them feel more realistic, add some depth to them. I can't help but feel that those two things would have went a long way in making this a more enjoyable and fulfilling storygame.

I can't say that this is the best love story that I've played, but this was certainly quite a interesting game.

This just lacks polish in many crucial areas.

It's truly amazing, but not enough options are a short story.

Hey I liked your game you should consider developing this into something more or making more games like this :). I think if you worked on it this could become something cool.

That was amazing!

Its so suicidal and depressing

haha,lol 3rd attempt won, its pretty funny how u end it, suicide? truck kun? XD XD love it

lol randomaly got on this. lowkey fun

Good

this was amazing

Mate, sorry to burst your unbelievably niave bubble, but... no girls love boys that much (no matter what you think. unless they're phsycho's)Also, YOU'RE NOT Shome shakespeare character, no 15 year old girls are going to attempt to take their life over you, Just going to let you know: I don't think your the catch you think you are. you and your over-inflated ego need to have a reality check. P.S. NEVER become an author or give advice as you clearly don't understand natural thought processes and consiqunce in your mind is obviously unrealistic.