Mechanised Assault Unit

Player Rating5.59/8

"#84 overall, #11 for 2007"
based on 503 ratings since 10/21/2007
played 11,194 times (finished 587)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

*UPDATED 22 Oct 07 - When someone dies - they stay dead. Continuity problems fixed :)

It is the distant future. The Sol Federation is a central, slowly expanding empire, spreading forth from the Earth. Out in the far reaches, frontier worlds have banded together to form their own pocket empires, desiring independance and living harsh frontier lives on desolate worlds.

In the early years, the Sol Federation provided food and material support to frontier realms, but that has changed. Now they will only offer support if such realms join the Federation. Rather than give up their independance, many frontiersman have become pirate raiders, entering the borders of Federation space to steal supplies from outposts and borderworlds.

On the planet Mesarius V, the Armed Forces of the Sol Federation (AFSF) keep constant vigil against raiding forces. As the pilot of a Mechanised Assault Unit (M.A.U.), a twenty ton walking war machine, you are one of the defenders of Mesarius V. It is your duty to engage raiders who land on the planet surface, and to help drive them back to the frontiers empty handed.

However, a threat of a different nature is approaching your world, and for a change, it may be more than you, and the entire armed forces of Mesarius V, can handle...

(This is possibly an 'introduction story' for a series, depending on how much people like it.)

Player Comments

Not a bad read, well paced and thought out if a little bit "over-descriptive" at times, Still enjoyable overall. Looking forward to something that'll tie up that cliffhanger though.
-- H-A-V-O-K on 4/13/2010 1:45:20 AM
Whoa, I request a sequel! That was great writing as always and although I'm not too fond of science fiction, this was a story I enjoyed. Great work!
-- GodsSlayer on 11/17/2007 6:56:37 AM
Amazing story. Could use a bit more depth, but waiting for a sequel.
-- Meru on 4/11/2017 11:16:32 PM
I have to say, it is very well written, i will agree with others that the story is too short but it keeps me wanting more. I cant want until the next chapter comes out.
-- SlovakolariK on 4/4/2017 11:55:16 AM
-- wolf on 3/18/2017 11:33:02 PM
A nice and quick premise and introduction, but has no real meat to its bones.
-- Crlarson1989 on 3/8/2017 6:34:48 PM
Good game. needs to be longer
-- travis on 12/29/2016 7:44:34 PM
Too much dialogue and too little action.
-- RasterAster on 11/28/2016 11:58:49 AM
This story was very interesting and it ran smoothly but also brought enjoyment to myself as a reader! I think that you should of added a bit more to this story because the choices I made came to, what felt like, an abrupt and unsatisfying end. Overall, this story brought me to such interest in what would happen next! Great Job on the story, Bud.
-- TheNonCreativeWriter on 11/23/2016 12:03:08 AM
It is good but, too much reading.
-- Jermy on 11/18/2016 1:26:13 PM
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