Player Comments on Mechanised Assault Unit

Not a bad read, well paced and thought out if a little bit "over-descriptive" at times, Still enjoyable overall. Looking forward to something that'll tie up that cliffhanger though.
-- H-A-V-O-K on 4/13/2010 1:45:20 AM
Whoa, I request a sequel! That was great writing as always and although I'm not too fond of science fiction, this was a story I enjoyed. Great work!
-- GodsSlayer on 11/17/2007 6:56:37 AM
This really wasn't my type of story game. It did however have very good descriptive details. It was well written and had a good amount of choices.
-- Faervel on 12/26/2018 3:17:51 PM
pretty good! I understood all that was going on in it very clearly and liked the humour. You just earned yourself an 8 out of 8!
-- rorytheassassin on 11/17/2018 12:23:09 AM
Found it too short need a sequel but good story but short
-- KingArslan on 7/17/2018 7:56:57 PM
The story is excellent, but I feel that some deaths were a bit cheap. A bit over descriptive. Will continue playing to get other outcomes.
-- Fiemouth on 6/9/2018 12:41:28 PM
So, I just finished the game, really cool plot and stuff. Got the ending where I'm not really sure what happens, but we survive. I liked that there's a bit of mystery with what happens to the planet in the ending I got.
-- harrypotter on 2/12/2018 9:48:59 AM
Not bad, except it is boring that there are no battle scenes like selecting weapons and blasting them! ;D
-- TestingJest on 12/11/2017 9:32:50 PM
Pretty good. Got what I think is the best ending on my first try. Pretty good story and plot.
-- Weirdleard on 12/3/2017 8:58:36 PM
I loved it! It was pretty good, although you should make a sequel (if you haven't done that yet).
-- Bob_The_Destroyer on 11/20/2017 8:52:54 AM
What the heck, this is stupid
-- 1329557 on 11/15/2017 3:52:38 PM
good fun
-- JohnX on 9/19/2017 3:20:48 PM
wishing i could write as good as you lol
-- Crow7777 on 7/14/2017 3:06:52 AM
Amazing story. Could use a bit more depth, but waiting for a sequel.
-- Meru on 4/11/2017 11:16:32 PM
I have to say, it is very well written, i will agree with others that the story is too short but it keeps me wanting more. I cant want until the next chapter comes out.
-- SlovakolariK on 4/4/2017 11:55:16 AM
amazing
-- wolf on 3/18/2017 11:33:02 PM
A nice and quick premise and introduction, but has no real meat to its bones.
-- Crlarson1989 on 3/8/2017 6:34:48 PM
Good game. needs to be longer
-- travis on 12/29/2016 7:44:34 PM
Too much dialogue and too little action.
-- RasterAster on 11/28/2016 11:58:49 AM
This story was very interesting and it ran smoothly but also brought enjoyment to myself as a reader! I think that you should of added a bit more to this story because the choices I made came to, what felt like, an abrupt and unsatisfying end. Overall, this story brought me to such interest in what would happen next! Great Job on the story, Bud.
-- TheNonCreativeWriter on 11/23/2016 12:03:08 AM
It is good but, too much reading.
-- Jermy on 11/18/2016 1:26:13 PM
Awsome sci-fi story
-- Elliott on 11/10/2016 12:36:23 PM
A lot shorter than expected in comparison to the Length ratings people have submitted, i would give it a 3/8 in terms of Length
-- Wulfaer on 10/11/2016 12:52:34 PM
The beginning is a little slow but its fun
-- Pinnacle_stanley on 8/8/2016 12:30:52 AM
Reminds me of battle tech. I played that game a lot. I'd like to see this expanded into a series. Cool.
-- crusader on 6/30/2016 6:37:17 PM
twas bad and really boring
-- me on 5/31/2016 10:45:46 AM
this was as much fun as ramming my head in a wall
-- barnes on 5/13/2016 11:37:33 PM
loved this
-- Owen on 4/26/2016 2:27:07 PM
Can't wait for the next one!
-- AwesomeSaucy on 4/9/2016 5:43:22 PM
I must agree with the other comments I read. This is a good read, a little overly descriptive but that does not diminish from the story.

My only problem with it is that it reads like the entire story was written from beginning to end and then the choices were added after. I say that because it seamed like I was being pushed to select the option that would bring me to the end of the story.

Either way, it was still a good, I enjoyed it and look forward to a sequel.
-- drackeye on 4/2/2016 5:40:02 PM
It was pretty cool. It was a fast paced action story. But for next time, add more choices and endings.
-- MisterMeep5 on 4/1/2016 4:42:54 PM
It's very good but too cheesy and pics were very low quality but good over all and I'd like to see a sequel
-- Jakob on 3/15/2016 3:57:18 PM
I liked this a lot, it was shorter than I thought it would be, but the length is still good. This is very well written.
-- corgi213 on 1/1/2016 10:51:44 AM
Don't stay at e fort, you'll just die. I did the whole thing with all routes in about 5 minutes
-- Horrible on 12/5/2015 7:44:42 PM
very good start, but want more. also, aliens seem the cliche overpowered and unstoppable. try to make them a little weaker. it he and interestlps add suspense when they still win but seem beatable
-- Paladin on 12/1/2015 11:44:31 PM
It feels like its been cut short. I would suggest that you make a sequel. And part of the reason I put"better than that food is because I can't have it.
-- ethandavidkermis on 11/29/2015 10:17:53 AM
I would love a sequel!
-- Zaraki Kenpachi on 11/13/2015 12:43:26 AM
Amaaazzzziiiinnnggg
-- Deez Nutz on 11/4/2015 10:09:49 AM
Long, rambling paragraphs that seem go on and on that I commonly found myself skipping through. Not entirely interesting.
-- TheMonitor on 9/23/2015 7:26:41 PM
The ending kind of left you hanging.
-- Tre' Smyre on 8/23/2015 2:40:30 PM
died by sword through the heart...ill take it
-- B on 8/14/2015 3:09:15 PM
Its great just Short
-- Shadow_Strider on 7/20/2015 10:39:04 AM
There are many ways to die
-- SpookySkelton53 on 3/30/2015 12:04:59 PM
While I am relatively new to this particular scene i have been reading and enjoying multiple choice text based games for a while now. personally, this story has great potential, but lacks in one major area - its VERY linear. I am assuming this is due to its short length, so i would recommend the author spend some more time on a full length story, rather than just a linear, shorter one. HOWEVER the author does have a lot of potential, and what i read was still intriguing and kept me reading further.
-- Pbailey on 3/28/2015 6:36:01 AM
this deserves a sequel. I looked in your author page for a sequel and didn't find one. I was disappointed. if you do decide to make a sequel one day I will read it because your story is truly one of the best I have read on this site.
-- stephen on 3/12/2015 12:49:26 PM
Oh Muh Guhd
-- KiritoLeeWillis2 on 3/4/2015 12:40:56 PM
It's a very good game. I'm interested to know more about the aliens, and see what happens.
-- Chase223 on 2/28/2015 4:26:24 AM
Holy crap! I felt like I was reading a book! The descriptions were awesome and an interesting ending. Needs a sequel!
-- Alexander on 2/8/2015 8:30:56 AM
Need much more. Good story line but need to continue story!!!!!
-- Crossquest on 2/6/2015 1:39:08 PM
Is there more?
-- mysteriousboss on 1/26/2015 2:56:16 PM
Very short,and very few paths.I hope the new one will we better.
-- the_lone_noob on 1/24/2015 11:58:38 PM
Could be longer, I wish it had been
-- WolfDemon on 12/24/2014 5:36:10 AM
A fun theme and fairly direct path.
-- gclaassen on 9/30/2014 12:07:49 AM
epic .
great
fuck yeah!
the best imcs ever .
-- josh on 9/15/2014 2:55:06 PM
Too short but I hope there would be a sequel. One day.
-- MartinCD on 8/12/2014 11:23:13 AM
The story line is very good but kinda short.. When it ended i was hoping for more.. Am gonna check if there is a sequel.. If not, hope it comes soon
-- salvator786 on 8/2/2014 5:37:13 PM
It was pretty short, I liked it, and to gage whether or not people would like it I would say it is a good game. I would love to see more of this series in the future.
-- sneak on 7/31/2014 12:35:40 PM
it was a bit short but enjoyable read i hope you make a sequel
-- Belphegor on 7/23/2014 9:37:55 PM
A fun little game
-- Serenemyth on 7/19/2014 8:27:11 PM
It wasn't bad, quite descriptive, though I felt the storyline was a bit linear, with only one epilogue I have found so far. Also, it lacked explanation, and the endings just seemed very abrupt. An interesting read nonetheless.
-- ApparentEccentric on 7/17/2014 12:47:14 AM
A nice adventure. Felt a bit short, cannot wait for sequels. The ideas and plot setting are awesome. 6/8. Would like to see actual combat, though.
-- lukeskywalker645 on 6/6/2014 4:13:11 AM
A confusing story.
-- EarthCollision on 3/10/2014 2:37:03 PM
Amazing! I loved playing as the captain, since I got to order what to do. It was amazing! Absolutely amazing! Second favorite game on the site!
7/8.
-- ShriekingTiger44 on 2/7/2014 2:55:45 AM
Rather well writen story, but a bit light on the game side of this thing.
Long parts of text between choices and not always a real choice after each of those parts. You often just have a "clic here for next page" link.
-- Jean-Mi Wan on 11/30/2013 6:23:32 PM
Too short, but a good story. It's a shame the aliens were really never explained though, and I expected to fight some of the frontier raiders based on the intro. Can you make a sequel where the aliens are actually FOUGHT?
-- Anonymous on 11/6/2013 7:41:12 PM
it was ok. if there is another one i will read it.
-- death mute on 9/28/2013 7:28:19 AM
Nice but needs a conclusion.
-- isaacssv558 on 9/11/2013 10:56:42 AM
It was an okay okay game. Nice try though.
-- Il_Maestro on 9/3/2013 4:33:30 PM
It is a good story, but the characters aren't given strong enough personalities for me to care for their well being, and its too short for me
-- Kwism1127 on 8/26/2013 9:54:34 PM
An interesting idea, but it felt very railroaded and short. There was also a lack of back-story on both characters and how the enemy managed to get a hold of the Behemoths. I would still like to see a sequel however.
-- MythicBowman on 8/19/2013 1:39:26 AM
Meh. Bit on the short side, I found it fairly disapointing that there was only one ending, although the creatoe did say that this could result in a sequel....

Alright.
-- Who really cares? on 8/12/2013 12:16:48 AM
this i a great story full of well thought out character development and an awesome if brief story. i am at a loss for words as to how you managed to create such a great story. this definitely deserves more than a 10.
-- Jason x on 7/19/2013 11:12:09 PM
I liked the game. Lots of action. Too bad I died.
-- harrypotter on 6/11/2013 7:52:46 AM
Great story! I want to build something similar to the M.A.U.s!
-- Jonathan on 5/29/2013 12:19:30 PM
Great Game! Lots of action and detail.
-- harrypotter on 4/27/2013 10:17:42 AM
Great read.. Need more!
-- Leoricus86 on 4/26/2013 6:10:11 AM
Great story i was able to understand immediatly.
-- ja50n on 4/4/2013 10:59:54 AM
To Short
-- Nelly on 3/21/2013 2:38:57 PM
Very good writing.
-- Xt1000305 on 3/20/2013 10:08:47 PM
Fun game! Not sure how many epilogues are there all in all. :)
-- toni on 3/3/2013 10:55:49 PM
They need to make a sequel. This was really fun
-- Guy Person on 3/3/2013 5:56:06 PM
A great story, but too short and it needs more endings
5.2 out of 10
-- TheImmortalOmegagoldfish on 11/17/2012 8:08:03 AM
Great story. You should really make a sequel.
-- joshua101 on 10/27/2012 8:34:02 PM
Is there only one ending?
-- Omegagoldfish on 9/18/2012 8:27:22 PM
awesome.
-- haledakota on 9/2/2012 4:20:00 PM
I enjoyed this.^_^ Very good. Some people say it's a bit over-descriptive, but I like it like that, really let's people know about the story, sets the mood. Nice job! I would love to see a sequel. You oh so totally should make a sequel with more choices and whatnot. Keep up the good work!
-- ChaiHai on 8/18/2012 3:22:11 AM
got to the pilogue in the first time... apparently, im a storygame expert, i know what could happen always.
-- Marmotlord on 6/9/2012 5:08:39 PM
a little shorter than I expected, but good!
-- cm on 6/2/2012 7:17:41 PM
its good,make another one,but I suggest you make more options and/or less to read.
-- martin on 3/31/2012 4:00:48 AM
I liked i,t cant wait for second one.
-- CovElite on 3/8/2012 12:11:09 AM
It was a fun read, but short and pretty linear, from what i found there is only one way to win, and it doesnt even feel like winning.
-- ugilick on 6/27/2011 12:41:21 AM
not my cup of tea
-- HeliosTheImmortal on 5/24/2011 11:10:04 PM
Good game, and well written. The only problem is that it is a bit short, and left on a cliff-hanger.
-- Steve on 4/30/2011 8:13:34 PM
Awsomeee
-- Jon on 3/19/2011 11:10:11 PM
I want to see more of this. more ways to fight or live would be nice.
-- chimera on 12/9/2010 3:07:45 AM
I wouldliketo see more.
-- Ahriman on 9/26/2010 8:43:36 AM
wow...cliffhangers suck,but this game is 8/8, this was so copyed off of mech assualt because it has battlesuits and the mechs are simular to the ones in the games but i still love this
-- doodoodude on 9/13/2010 7:47:46 PM
neat game, hope there will be a second part
-- maheusz on 5/14/2010 11:45:32 AM
very good, but i hate cliffhangers
-- crition on 9/22/2009 5:03:38 PM
love it! but to many words!
-- miller100 on 8/26/2009 7:26:50 PM
Well written, a cut above the usual. :)
-- Juranas on 8/21/2009 5:26:35 PM
I did'nt like the ending why blend in with cilvains and wait for reinforse ments
-- 123colby123 on 7/17/2009 9:05:09 PM
Nice job, tsmpaul. Great descriptive writing with a lot of excitement. Your stories are always a pleasure to read.
-- madglee on 7/18/2008 11:48:07 AM
Excellent writing, and definately needs a sequel.
-- Rodney on 7/17/2008 10:32:26 PM
good job i like the pictures and good writing
play lengh 5? wow thats off
Great story, great, great story
-- th*mage*of*kings on 7/15/2008 5:36:50 PM
I have reread this story in a more relaxed mindset, and I still think there arent enough choices, but the story is good enough for a 7. Great work tsmpaul!
-- Rommel on 11/23/2007 10:57:22 PM
Great game, I liked the action and fast pace of it all. I also liked the descriptions of the metalic MAU'S.

Please do continue writing this story, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Sequal anyone?
-- ExiledPhoenix on 10/29/2007 6:03:12 PM
Another great game from Paul! Great job!
-- DarthVader_13 on 10/28/2007 3:38:38 AM
It was good, but the descriptions can get TOO detailed. Try to be more concise. Writing was superb as always, but there weren't enough choices to make it THAT good. I say 5/8
-- Rommel on 10/27/2007 10:42:41 PM
Well, I died a lot, but before I did that, I noticed a few continuity problems, mainly wolfman dying twice, first when leaving the fort, then agan when running away from the alien dudes.
And yeah, i would like to see where this is going, really.
-- Cozmic on 10/21/2007 8:17:37 AM
That was pretty flippin' good. I especially enjoyed the, well, the machinery. I always used to love the Mech Warrior Games for the PC
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 10/20/2007 10:30:18 PM
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