Fiemouth, The Contributor

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Thoughts on the refugee crisis in Europe? on 9/12/2015 7:16:21 AM

I can understand where you're coming from Danaos.  Also, did  you send me a PM? If you did I didn't receive it.


Thoughts on the refugee crisis in Europe? on 9/11/2015 7:39:46 PM

Western nations always claim to be united in any adversity, especially when it comes to the possibility war. This shouldn't be any different. Why not create a system to divide the refugees among nations like Germany, France, Spain, Britain, Canada, and the United States. 

This Danaos character faces the common fears that most people have. They fear of losing what little they have or having their lives become harder for them. As a American that comes from a low class family, I can understand why people from my country would want the government to to focus on internal issues.

There are few give a damn about people they don't know who's presence can potentially ruin their lives. With that said, I would vote to let them ALL in. Regardless of whether we turn them away or accept them, there are going to be consequences. Might as well go down doing the right thing. 

 


Space Opera Outline Complete :) on 7/23/2015 4:37:00 PM

Well in that case, I'll check it out and see how it goes.


Space Opera Outline Complete :) on 7/22/2015 10:32:06 PM

Soooo... I just finish my first story outline, ever. What I mean is that this is the first story I've planned in which I know what happens at the beginning, middle, and end. Frankly, I'm FREAKING excited. Now it's time for me to actually write this thing.

I don't know how long it's going to take me finish, but judging by the amount of notes I have, It's  going to be a long, long time. I feel that the Advance editor would be more appropriate to use for this story.

However, I don't have time to learn how to use it properly and that's probably for the best since this is my first CYOA. 

Anyway, here's some early character snippets.

Male Protagonist: High Prince Dawid Boesch, Liege Vassal of the Valendeer Commonwealth, Captain Commander in His Majesty's Imperial Ground Squadron.

Female Protagonist: High Princess Janina Boesch, Liege Vassal of the Valendeer Commonwealth, Imperial Councilor in His Majesty's Senate Union

The "High" means that you are the firstborn child of the line so depending on which one you pick, the other will not exist. Both will have their own stories that will converge in the third act.

So, thoughts or suggestions for a first time writer?