My Basic Day
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Based Off A True Story
This is a test run for one of my classes. It is about a basic day for me.
Okay, so yes, It's boring, BUT! You wrote this better than a lot of people write, with little to no grammatical errors, this 'Basic Day' exceeds most. It was interesting to see so much detail put into something so 'boring' (Well, you did say it all happened to you, meaning it's a true story, so it would only be right to have detail).
You have plenty of potential for a really good story, so I say you keep at writing! Back to the story;
Alongside having (as expected) branching variables in the story that more or less affect the plot, it was notable that, instead of saying; 'I got home and went to bed. The end.', you actually added more to the story with an after school arc. I enjoyed your basic day, hope to see more work from you sometime!
on 8/29/2017 8:14:49 PM with a score of 0
Well the first page warning was correct! This was very boring. And pointless.
Since the author was obviously aware of all this, why was it published at all?
on 1/14/2017 8:36:12 PM with a score of 0
More of a story than a storygame.
on 12/25/2016 2:34:09 PM with a score of 0
XD It literally is acurate. It's slightly more fun then Homework, for a school day. :D
on 12/22/2016 10:54:47 PM with a score of 0
i shouldn't have had such high expectations in the beginning
-- jj morgan on 9/6/2016 5:41:32 PM with a score of 0
-- Kate on 5/26/2016 8:18:50 PM with a score of 0
I'm pretty sure the title of this storygame says it all. The warning at the beginning of the storygame that says this is going to be boring tells you whatever the title doesn't.
Then again, I'm pretty sure the author isn't going for an interesting storygame.
on 1/10/2016 2:38:54 PM with a score of 0
kinda short and boring
-- missIluvminecraft on 12/26/2015 4:29:31 AM with a score of 0
Literally "choose your own boredom".
on 8/27/2015 5:36:02 PM with a score of 0
This game didn't really have a point. None of my actions really did anything in the long run. The grammar was good, unlike some other games, but the story for this game was, as you warned us, boring.
on 7/17/2015 10:09:20 AM with a score of 0
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