My Basic Day

Player Rating2.73/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 233 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

This is a test run for one of my classes. It is about a basic day for me.

Player Comments

Okay, so yes, It's boring, BUT! You wrote this better than a lot of people write, with little to no grammatical errors, this 'Basic Day' exceeds most. It was interesting to see so much detail put into something so 'boring' (Well, you did say it all happened to you, meaning it's a true story, so it would only be right to have detail).

You have plenty of potential for a really good story, so I say you keep at writing! Back to the story;

Alongside having (as expected) branching variables in the story that more or less affect the plot, it was notable that, instead of saying; 'I got home and went to bed. The end.', you actually added more to the story with an after school arc. I enjoyed your basic day, hope to see more work from you sometime!
-- Comic on 8/29/2017 8:14:49 PM with a score of 0
Well the first page warning was correct! This was very boring. And pointless.

Since the author was obviously aware of all this, why was it published at all?
-- mizal on 1/14/2017 8:36:12 PM with a score of 0
More of a story than a storygame.
-- Quorrah on 12/25/2016 2:34:09 PM with a score of 0
XD It literally is acurate. It's slightly more fun then Homework, for a school day. :D
-- Chickdove on 12/22/2016 10:54:47 PM with a score of 0
i shouldn't have had such high expectations in the beginning
-- jj morgan on 9/6/2016 5:41:32 PM with a score of 0
Pretty short.
-- Kate on 5/26/2016 8:18:50 PM with a score of 0
I'm pretty sure the title of this storygame says it all. The warning at the beginning of the storygame that says this is going to be boring tells you whatever the title doesn't.

Then again, I'm pretty sure the author isn't going for an interesting storygame.
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/10/2016 2:38:54 PM with a score of 0
kinda short and boring
-- missIluvminecraft on 12/26/2015 4:29:31 AM with a score of 0
Literally "choose your own boredom".
xD
-- JplaysStuff on 8/27/2015 5:36:02 PM with a score of 0
This game didn't really have a point. None of my actions really did anything in the long run. The grammar was good, unlike some other games, but the story for this game was, as you warned us, boring.
-- GMB13carat on 7/17/2015 10:09:20 AM with a score of 0
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