"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 369 times (finished 80)
"wandering through the desert"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
This game is about being a pirate during piracy's golden age.
This game had a lot of potential as a pirate game, but it suffered from a few problems, first one being the pacing and the length, second being the grammar and third being the short pages that lacked any absolute description.
1) Ok, the pacing in this game is so off that one moment I was a random crew-member on a ship and thirty seconds later I was the pirate king, facing my second-in-command as he tried to kill me and when I killed him, I found that years later, he had a son who avenged a father that willingly left the navy, abandoned him and joined my character as a pirate... all this happened so fast that even Sonic would have a hard time catching up with the plot of this story.
2) Your grammar and punctuation is not horrible, but it isn't anything really good either and due to this fact, the story suffered all the more for it, which is a damn real shame since I actually looked forward to a swashbuckling pirate adventure.
3) Though this goes hand in hand with point two, I feel like I really needed to talk about it. I would lie if I said that I do not enjoy pirate stories and such a premise is bound to draw me in most of the time, but when I get a game that has little to no description of the characters themselves, well then I feel hurt on personal level. For example, you could have had Lewis offhandedly remark about his kid, or give the main character some description, or at least allow us to make him look like we wished to.
Well, despite all of this, I did get a bit of enjoyment from the game, though it's a real shame it could not be any better, I will rate this a 3/8 for the premise of the story and the potential this story had.
on 3/2/2017 10:50:29 AM
There were some dumb deaths, but it was pretty good. 5/8
on 12/17/2015 3:41:42 PM
There is a huge chance that winning will recquire multiple tries but its not too hard.
on 7/7/2015 12:49:36 AM
on 6/29/2015 8:41:21 AM
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