Project Origin: Atrophy (Part 2)

Player Rating6.55/8

"#57 overall, #12 for 2012"
based on 141 ratings since 08/17/2012
played 2,060 times (finished 118)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

That's the thing about Death. It's better to give than to receive.

 

 

Part 2 of the Project Origin series. It is suggested that you play Part 1 first.

 

 

 

Warning: Graphic violence

 

Part III coming soon

Player Comments

You did an excellent job of making the story comprehensible even for someone who hasn't played the game it's based on. As a fanfic, it's quite well written. (A touch melodramatic for my taste, but it's clear from the comments that many people found it affecting.)

As a storygame, I think it could be improved. There was a very long stretch of pages with no choice towards the end, which I think contributed to my overall feeling that it just wasn't a very compelling story. Horrible things happened to Alma. And then more horrible things happened. And then I could choose between screaming and weeping. And then more horrible stuff happened.
I didn't feel as though anything I did would affect the outcome of the story in the slightest.
-- Sethaniel on 8/30/2013 9:38:11 AM with a score of 0
People often don't understand the monsters perspective. They just assume they kill because they are evil. Most of the time there is a reason for their madness. A preditor is hungry so it eats a person, just like a person get hungry and eats a cow. It is only dark and morbid from the prey's perspective. Love this series. keep up with the shattered perceptions.
-- alienalpha on 8/19/2012 11:16:01 AM with a score of 0
It's amazing how you manage to hold onto the emotional rage of the character throughout the entire story. It's so dark and morbid, but in a way that captures your attention and keeps it until the end. I for one cannot wait until she gets her revenge!
-- BerkaZerka on 8/11/2012 1:27:03 AM with a score of 0
Good continuation of part one.
-- BigRonn77 on 8/15/2016 12:54:27 PM with a score of 0
This story reminds me of my past through out the centuries people with special gifts are always hunted down and tortured in the name of "science". i apreciate what you have done.
-- The guardian of souls on 4/27/2016 10:52:35 AM with a score of 0
Okay... I liked it.
-- CurseOfTime on 4/2/2016 1:19:50 PM with a score of 0
Cool...
-- corgi213 on 9/19/2015 8:32:12 PM with a score of 0
Another great entry. Just as good as the 1st part. Hope part 3 is still in the works
-- JinDary on 5/25/2015 7:39:58 PM with a score of 0
Loved it.
-- XxDragonslayerxX on 11/9/2014 11:37:13 PM with a score of 0
An amazing addition to the first part of the story! Love it and can't wait for part three.
-- insanebutvain on 6/13/2014 12:53:29 AM with a score of 0
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