Project Origin: Atrophy (Part 2)

Player Rating6.54/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 153 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

I'm temporarily unpublishing this game. 

It's been about 6 years since I've really been active on this site and coming back after all of this time and looking at my work I realize that the first installation in this game series is absolute crap and needs to be redone. 

It doesn't makes sense to have a part 2 published without a part 1. So until I feel up to doing a total overhaul of part one, I'm unpublishing both of them.

I'll leave this one with a sneak peak option since it's actually decent and people seemed to enjoy it.

Player Comments

You did an excellent job of making the story comprehensible even for someone who hasn't played the game it's based on. As a fanfic, it's quite well written. (A touch melodramatic for my taste, but it's clear from the comments that many people found it affecting.)

As a storygame, I think it could be improved. There was a very long stretch of pages with no choice towards the end, which I think contributed to my overall feeling that it just wasn't a very compelling story. Horrible things happened to Alma. And then more horrible things happened. And then I could choose between screaming and weeping. And then more horrible stuff happened.
I didn't feel as though anything I did would affect the outcome of the story in the slightest.
-- Sethaniel on 8/30/2013 9:38:11 AM with a score of 0
People often don't understand the monsters perspective. They just assume they kill because they are evil. Most of the time there is a reason for their madness. A preditor is hungry so it eats a person, just like a person get hungry and eats a cow. It is only dark and morbid from the prey's perspective. Love this series. keep up with the shattered perceptions.
-- alienalpha on 8/19/2012 11:16:01 AM with a score of 0
It's amazing how you manage to hold onto the emotional rage of the character throughout the entire story. It's so dark and morbid, but in a way that captures your attention and keeps it until the end. I for one cannot wait until she gets her revenge!
-- BerkaZerka on 8/11/2012 1:27:03 AM with a score of 0
I need more..this story really teaches you that monsters aren't born but made.
-- Forepaw on 7/12/2017 4:43:47 AM with a score of 0
Good continuation of part one.
-- BigRonn77 on 8/15/2016 12:54:27 PM with a score of 0
This story reminds me of my past through out the centuries people with special gifts are always hunted down and tortured in the name of "science". i apreciate what you have done.
-- The guardian of souls on 4/27/2016 10:52:35 AM with a score of 0
Okay... I liked it.
-- CurseOfTime on 4/2/2016 1:19:50 PM with a score of 0
Cool...
-- corgi213 on 9/19/2015 8:32:12 PM with a score of 0
Another great entry. Just as good as the 1st part. Hope part 3 is still in the works
-- JinDary on 5/25/2015 7:39:58 PM with a score of 0
Loved it.
-- XxDragonslayerxX on 11/9/2014 11:37:13 PM with a score of 0
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