Player Comments on Reckless Young Man

The first page starts out as a nice surprise after reading that this was very short and basically a demo. When I see that on the page properties page, I really do get my expectations reduced. If it’s a demo, I just don’t see any reason to actually publish it. Well, there are some reasons, but none are all that good. After all, people here are looking for quality stories (at least some of the readers here are, anyway).

There is some really good writing on that first page. Sure, the tone and the scene are pretty crappy, but I guess that’s the point. But the point was received quite well with the good writing. I wouldn’t have minded to know just a little bit more about the car, myself, so I know what the main character is driving. It’s a four-barrel, but what else?

The writing was good throughout. The options were, well not all that great, IMO. But there were options and the different options led to different endings, and that was really nice to see in a CYOA. As mentioned in the intro, indeed the story, no matter which options were selected, was very, very short. This story has a little potential and really could be developed a bit more into a much better story. But again, the writing was very good for a story of this length. Thank you for sharing it with the site.
-- Ogre11 on 7/11/2018 12:24:46 PM with a score of 0
Dude you used a SUPER offensive word
-- Dave on 1/3/2019 5:13:36 PM with a score of 0
Well written, made me laugh
-- RYM on 1/12/2016 12:16:03 PM with a score of 0
Why?-Not everyone chooses what you think they would, plus some parts were predictable to me, namely plan C, saw that coming a mile away.
-- DeathIncarnate on 9/1/2015 2:57:35 PM with a score of 0
Awesome haha. Not an inspiring epic, but the humorous chooseyourownstory that's just as great.
-- Doomcomer on 4/10/2015 8:29:22 PM with a score of 0
HILARIOUS! Worth way more than the five minutes it took to play!
-- Yukabacera on 4/19/2014 5:19:59 AM with a score of 0
That was fast. xD lol.
Disturb the peace ftw.
-- DeepMisery on 4/14/2014 8:34:56 AM with a score of 0
Ya, Donuts. What's Reckless in Dictionary Means anyway?
-- RabbitSeason on 1/14/2014 7:41:26 AM with a score of 0
Good 'un!
-- Il_Maestro on 8/31/2013 11:14:10 PM with a score of 0
Like the game. Not just because I dueled you. No, I like the game because it is very explanitory but you need !put more deqil inffthe story. Saying that you had fun is not explanning and make the maturity level higher. I would have still played the game. Nice job!
-- dbzfan94 on 5/5/2013 10:14:16 PM with a score of 0
Awwww man you troll!!!!!!!
-- PenguinSharpshooter on 3/20/2013 12:56:05 PM with a score of 0
-- chasemeee on 2/11/2013 10:51:41 AM with a score of 0
Not bad, but I had to subtract one from six cause it was way too short, especially for such a fun game.
-- Tgetruegamer on 2/10/2013 4:42:18 AM with a score of 0
Nice, but could be better.
-- CovElite on 1/3/2013 10:46:19 AM with a score of 0
Short but neat storygame. lovely writing
-- Xt1000305 on 12/19/2012 2:16:14 AM with a score of 0
I think your writing's really good! Am looking forward to reading some longer stories from you, but hope your next main character is more likable. Was really happy when this guy died! :p
-- Briar_Rose on 11/13/2012 11:01:31 AM with a score of 0
xD loved the "disturb the peace" ending. Kudos.
-- Kiel_Farren on 9/16/2012 10:33:30 AM with a score of 0
That was pretty good. Your disturb the peace ending made me laugh. You correctly predicted my actions. This was fun, seeing as this line of thought is totally opposite mine, and I'm a girl. XD I had fun.^_^ 6/8
-- ChaiHai on 8/14/2012 1:37:06 AM with a score of 0
Beyond the horizon!
-- RobustSporadic on 6/21/2012 2:43:12 AM with a score of 0
The beginning was promising. if you rewrite this you can make it a lot better as a long, good story.
-- fergie14233 on 1/28/2012 4:25:11 PM with a score of 0
. . . I don't like girls. (Even if I was male I wouldn't.)
-- NeverMind on 1/27/2012 10:40:31 PM with a score of 0
I got the most reckless ending and what you said was so, so true
-- playa988 on 1/5/2012 5:31:57 AM with a score of 0
Oh my god bro, I loved it haha. It was so juvenile in the best of ways.

Also... it was short
-- ThisisBo on 10/30/2011 9:50:05 PM with a score of 0
It's soo funny XD the cursing could've been placed better and not used in every single senance. Other than that I thought it was entertaining.
-- alienalpha on 10/26/2011 11:31:20 AM with a score of 0
Lol i guees I am out of the loop...
I decided to choose Distube the peace for my first time around thinking, I might get laid while becoming a Ganster dude. :P
-- Fireplay on 10/25/2011 5:08:35 PM with a score of 0
-- Killer999 on 10/25/2011 8:55:09 AM with a score of 0
You use profanity without tact, seriously weakening the effect it COULD have. titular doesn't make sense where you put it. Overlooking that is was quite enjoyable, or at least the two pages that I read.
-- ugilick on 10/24/2011 9:29:10 PM with a score of 0
Decent writing. -1 for use of racial slur on the first page and -1 for using Titular Character on one of the pages.
-- urnam0 on 10/24/2011 6:42:34 PM with a score of 0
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