School and Cool

Player Rating3.91/8

"#450 overall, #49 for 2013"
based on 220 ratings since 05/04/2013
played 2,090 times (finished 201)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

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School. It can build a social life then wreck it! In this game you play as a lonely girl senior in high school. Your goal is to finally make some friends after a long time of being lonely. If you want, you can also get a date!

 

(This is my first story. Enjoy! )

Player Comments

I really wished there were more options. If I have a phone and Warner also has a phone, why can't I just call/text him to see which restaurant we're going to?
Who is Beth?? Why does she matter at all?
Why can't I date Caitlyn?
-- mindovermattie on 11/3/2019 6:58:40 PM with a score of 0
Choose Freddy to be your boyfriend
-- Pink girl on 2/3/2019 10:38:55 AM with a score of 0
This Stroy Is Pretty Good. A little bit cliche but good I had a fun time with it. The only thing I can find wrong with it is that it,s a little short maybe edit to add more choices. I know this could take a long time to make so maybe I could help or give suggestions. I provided my email so If you want me to give you some suggestions on how to make the story longer and meaningful choices. I give this story 6/8 becuase Nothing is better Than Resse cups
-- Carter Young on 10/27/2018 4:43:03 PM with a score of 0
It's good!
-- khadijahzahra09 on 10/23/2018 6:00:03 AM with a score of 0
it was realy good
-- hey_little_dudes on 7/17/2018 1:15:10 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good
-- ileto on 4/23/2018 6:02:02 PM with a score of 0
Cool
Really cool
Great
Really great
-- Cat on 2/15/2018 12:52:05 PM with a score of 0
Its good
-- Ashu on 11/17/2017 4:31:51 AM with a score of 0
This was awesome, especially if you only have like 10 min to play.
-- Rosey1106 on 10/21/2017 1:45:57 PM with a score of 0
The story was extremely linear. Sure, it would have diverging choices here or there, but after one or two pages, they'd all return to the same plot line.
There were also oddly random selections that you used, and each page was rather short. Not a lot to read. You were vague about things that weren't cat related. The grammar, however, was very good, and didn't leave me cringing halfway through the story.
I recommend that you try a bit harder at your next work, putting more thought, detail and love into it, as well as a non-linear story line.
Regardless of the cons I mention, I think you show promising potential, and if you really just try, you'll be guaranteed to do better next time!
-- Comic on 9/7/2017 12:11:21 AM with a score of 0
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