Snake Eyes

Player Rating2.25/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 53 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

A monopoly game gets really weird when you land snake eyes.
(Snake eyes is double ones)

 

Try to find the special lose ending!

Player Comments

pshh. short needs to be longer
-- Jimmysutton on 12/14/2015 11:27:15 AM with a score of 0
This storygame, like so many others on this site, feels like it had some potentially good ideas but it just wasn't detailed enough. It's all so fleeting that I can't really get attached to any of the characters or feel too strongly about the (weak) plot.

This storygame is probably trying to be lighthearted and short rather than a serious days-long read, and I appreciate that, but it still feels like you could have made it better by making it longer. If you write in dialogue by the characters themselves, it can bring them to life. In this kind of story it would also be a great opportunity to inject humour into it.

At least this storygame is relatively well written with little to no writing errors.
-- 31TeV on 6/1/2015 11:57:00 AM with a score of 0
Short but sweet.
-- PortalSpartan on 4/28/2015 6:20:25 AM with a score of 0
Don't lissen to what other people say, I really enjoyed this story. Please continue write.
-- Silver sorrow on 4/27/2015 5:56:04 PM with a score of 0
okay never expected this.
-- katkid98 on 4/14/2015 9:57:27 AM with a score of 0
way too short and the story line doesn't make sense i guess but other then that it was pretty good
-- pokelover59 on 12/10/2014 9:27:57 PM with a score of 0
Way too random with some of the earlier game choices and rather short for the branching endings
-- atmosbolt on 6/29/2014 2:55:38 PM with a score of 0
Needs work. 1/8. But thumbs up on the creativity.
-- Timetodie on 6/20/2014 2:59:40 PM with a score of 0
...random.
-- coke_monster on 6/6/2014 10:18:44 PM with a score of 0
ehh.. that pretty much sums it up. either ye go in to be daring & brave to impress, or be a coward & die. extremely way too short (barely started to get into it & then it ended).
-- bearclaw01234 on 6/4/2014 5:46:24 PM with a score of 0
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