Sora (Chapter 1)

Player Rating3.75/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 64 ratings since 09/25/2013
played 737 times (finished 64)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Swept away in the first chapter of the book of Sora, where you make your own choices and choose your own romances.

You get to choose who to trust and who to be friends with.

You are one of the last 10 Guardians, ordered to protect Time and the world before you.

You will embark on a quest to find your missing best friend only to find out an awful dark secret that involve most of your choice.

This is a fantasy paranormal romance RPG be wary on who you romance. You have 4 choices. 2 guys and 2 girls. One of the girls are Bisexual.

Summary: (Your Name) (Last Name) always wanted a normal life, but that changed when one day her best friend Nathan went missing suddenly, Confused, you came upon a terrible secret.

 

This is the first chapter of the series.

This RPG intents for girls, but guys are welcome.

LOVE INTERESTS:

ALEXANDER: The Newly approved Keeper of Time. He can be somewhat cold and aloof when he wants too. He has a trouble past. One that even (Your Name) can hope to understand. He's the one who calling the main character. If the correct choice is made the main character can romance him, but otherwise he will stay as a friend who has a small crush on the main character.

NATHAN:  The second Guardian of Time, his power is mainly wind. Sora. The main character have a chance to romance the character but it would be somewhat hard. Nathan is the main character best friend from childhood. He's easy going and well loved. He almost takes nothing seriously till later on in the game.

Bridget: The Third Guardian of Time, her power involves fire. She has a very short temper at almost everything and extremely bitter since her parents recent deaths. She's Bisexual could be romanced.

Melissa: The Fourth Guardian of Time,  her power involves water and ice. She's a nice friendly girl and very understanding. She's best friend or (rival) to the main character.

Player Comments

Um... first before I forget: "He told me, taking another sip of his tea with grace and I was so memorized." What exactly does the last part mean?

Okay, moving on. Grammar. I caught a few mistakes here and there (the above quoted sentence actually contains a mistake—missing comma), but it doesn't completely destroy coherency, so that's good.

I really, really like the idea of the story! It went along smoothly and nicely, and it was very enjoyable. However... don't post sections/demos. Most people don't really like them... but if you just HAVE to, at least include "part of a series" as a tag.

I like how the story picks up and runs, but hate how it ends suddenly at the end of Chapter 1. Please expand! *eagerly awaits* This storygame has A LOT of potential!
-- Crescentstar on 12/3/2016 10:36:58 PM
I really don't like the choice of using (your name) throughout to indicate the player's name. Just pick a name.
Also, it falls into the common VN trap of "one choice locks you onto a path."
There are a lot of grammatical errors, even in the description. "One of the girls are a bisexual?"
-- Sethaniel on 4/11/2015 10:37:43 AM
Hard to understand bc the story jumps so much.
-- Quorrah on 1/17/2017 6:59:41 PM
Good story in my opinion so far. Grammatical errors here and there, but it's pretty interesting.
-- ponistiti on 4/7/2016 3:03:15 PM
Ok story. But I HATE drafts and previews.
-- CurseOfTime on 1/28/2016 4:08:49 PM
Nice concept, but you should proofread your stories. Did Alexander die his russet hair dark brown?
-- Supergirlpower on 4/10/2015 9:24:58 PM
It was interesting, but hopefully a lot more will be explained in the following chapters. Also, hopefully as the player chooses different love intrusts there will be slightly different story pathways that aren't just death or next scene.
-- bookmonkey on 5/17/2014 1:39:54 PM
Please continue!!! :D I relly am excited now for more chapters even if there is bugs here and there in the story choices. But either way i enjoyed it nonless so keep up the good work ;)

(I hope we can interact with Nathan soon!)
-- golden45 on 9/29/2013 1:04:41 PM
Confusing, full of holes, and ridiculously unexplained.

Other than that, just wonderful. I feel like I was cheated.
-- ck23838 on 9/25/2013 8:14:08 AM
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