That One Dream Again

Player Rating4.78/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 19 ratings since 11/12/2017
played 143 times (finished 14)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length7/8

"It keeps going and going"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

This funny game has only a few serious moments. It was supposed to be only about dreaming but I got carried away and now I can't really tell you exactly what this is about.

You have this reoccurring dream that makes you uncomfortable and you decide that it's finally time to do something about it. You're not sure about what your next move is going to be, but you've had enough.

Embark on this entertaining and kind of silly adventure filled with mystery, action, romance and other things!

And enjoy!

Player Comments

I was wondering why this one was getting so little attention, and now that I've read it I can see the issue; it's hard to know what to say about this.

It started off as a strong effort by a new author and by the end it was just a mess. Leo, I'm disappointed. Seems like there were two separate ideas here, but you couldn't come up with a way to combine them so midway through you just dropped one completely and jumped into the other. And then you got bored with that too.

With a more deliberate approach to working out a coherent plot (and an end to the random author POV asides to the player, please...) I'm sure you have a lot of potential and I hope to eventually see more from you. You've got 'throw a bunch of random shit into a bowl' down, next time take it a couple steps further and blend it all together and bake a cake. Or maybe I'm just hungry.
-- mizal on 11/15/2017 8:25:44 PM
Not the longest, not the shortest. I don't think it is long enough to be rated at a seven for length. There weren't too many grammar and spelling mistakes that I remember.

This was a pretty interesting story and I hope you keep writing. Although if you want to get a good feel for story lengths read some of the top rated stories.
-- corgi213 on 11/13/2017 7:54:52 PM
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