Benajah765, The Reader

Member Since

3/3/2019

Last Activity

3/19/2019 9:54 PM

EXP Points

27

Post Count

9

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

0 wins / 0 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

1

Just a person that likes reading and writing CYOAs. 

I'm very inexperienced...

Also, my title is, "The Mystery Noob". That's what mizal called me, so...

 

 

 

 

Quotes: (This is what people have said to me...I guess?)

"Starting off like that, I'm sure you aren't interesting."- Cricket.

 "What the heck? Where did you come from?"- mizal

"Getting the same points across clearly in fewer words is a sign of good writing."- mizal 

(Yay! Apparently I'm a good writer!)

 

Storygames

The Quest Through Time
unpublished

Twelve year old Harlem has always been bullied, mostly because of his looks and how he acts. But danger is coming to his village, and he may be the only one that can stop it. 

Flee or Fight?

Run or Hide?

Live...or Die?

 


Recent Posts

Grief on 3/18/2019 10:49:29 AM

I cannot say I have ever experienced this type of pain. The only death I've experienced so far has been my grandfather, and that was when I was much younger. I am truly sorry for your loss and the pain you are going through.


Random Question on 3/18/2019 9:32:41 AM

"Hey! Blueberry!".

 My friends call me Blueberry (for some reason) so apparently this person heard and started calling me that too.


Random Question on 3/17/2019 7:36:57 PM

What's the weirdest thing someone has ever said to you?


Hello on 3/17/2019 6:51:55 PM

Yes, it is a beautiful book. The ending of the series is a bit depressing though.


Hello on 3/17/2019 4:50:14 PM

I''m not that big of a newbie...I've probably been here for about a month now. But I'm not popular or anything.


Hello on 3/17/2019 3:51:20 PM

Wow...that's a long answer. Now I feel like my answer was insignificant and tiny... * sobs *


Hello on 3/17/2019 3:22:26 PM

Hi! So first of all...welcome to the site! You'll find some good people here and other....weird people. (I'm one of the weird people.)

So.

1. General tips: Make sure you have it planned out. Writing a story is hard enough, but a CYOA is a story that turned into a tornado. You also need to check over your work. A lot. People on here will tell you what's wrong with a story, sometimes nicely, and sometimes not. So always check for grammar and spelling mistakes. Also, make sure you have a good idea. Nobody likes a boring story.

2. If you lose motivation in the middle of your story, take a break. And also, make sure you read a lot of CYOAs here on the site. They're great for motivation and ideas. (Shhh....don't make it seem like you copied their ideas. That's bad.)

3. Some must reads on the site are: The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost and...that's all I really enjoyed. Hopefully others can supply you with more.

4. Great goods you can and should read: Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson, Elantris by Brandon Sanderson, The Kingsfountain Series by Jeff Wheeler and that's what I can think of right now.

Glad to have you on the site! Hope you have a good time!


Hi...I'm new. on 3/7/2019 4:19:55 PM

Okay...good suggestion. I'll try that.


Hi...I'm new. on 3/7/2019 4:00:54 PM

Hello! I really didn't know that there were actual websites for CYOA, so when I discovered this place, I was so happy. 

I don't really have much to say...I'm not a very interesting person...