Player Comments on The Random Adventure

Wacky. Had a few funny parts, but the rest was just weird. Good try anyway.

— Shadowulf on 5/26/2016 6:03:40 AM with a score of 0

Can in the second one I steal their donuts? XD jk.

— XBaconRebellionX on 2/21/2016 10:50:52 AM with a score of 0

No white supremacy? :(
But yeah, pretty bad haha. I think overall people should make a more focused narrative fortheir first game, as opposed to a nonsensical one.

— Tanstaafl on 9/27/2015 1:20:12 PM with a score of 0

This was shit, short and retarted. You could have made the story way longer

— Ndnska on 5/2/2015 11:44:32 AM with a score of 0

Terrible.

— betaband on 4/9/2015 12:15:53 PM with a score of 0

Why put Godzilla as a choice if you cannot be him? This story was dreadful. 1/8

— Creature on 3/31/2015 11:40:28 AM with a score of 0

random

— ilovewaffles11 on 3/29/2015 5:09:33 PM with a score of 0

I can say this game sucks. I can say this game ruined mashed potatoes for me. I can say that Godzilla is one of the gender options.

And all of those statements would be true.

— Chris113022 on 3/18/2015 2:22:31 PM with a score of 0

... Mashed potatoes?

— Malkalack on 3/17/2015 9:08:47 PM with a score of 0

Well that's insulting. :/ I used to live in Detroit. Otherwise good.

— thequeen13 on 3/17/2015 4:23:41 PM with a score of 0

Can I ask, if you are going to put "I am Godzilla" as a choice, why make me end the game? You could have let us play as Godzilla, or else there wouldn't be point in putting that as a choice now, would there?

— lollolol on 3/17/2015 3:50:05 AM with a score of 0

Yep, that was pretty random...bits of it were funny. One thing I would say I wouldn't have a go at people for pointing out your grammar mistakes, if you can't write a joke you shouldn't expect people to laugh at it :) For a 5 minute time-filler this is ok

— Will11 on 3/16/2015 10:33:57 PM with a score of 0

I'm offended, but not really actually. I'm black.

— Caillou on 3/16/2015 9:28:44 PM with a score of 0

... The "random" part is accurate, but I wouldn't call what I read an adventure.

— Kiel_Farren on 3/16/2015 8:18:28 PM with a score of 0

Random humor all by its lonesome just isn't that funny to read, especially when it's all one line per page randomness.

— Bucky on 3/16/2015 8:08:26 PM with a score of 0

Uhh... Well, in all fairness it was random. Well done. ^_^

— Briar_Rose on 3/16/2015 7:57:06 PM with a score of 0

I'm giving this a 2/8 because it gave me just a sliver of amusement. Your grammar was okay at best, but the story was short.
Updating the story would help greatly.

— DerpBacon on 3/16/2015 7:13:52 PM with a score of 0

I...honestly don't know how to rate this.

— jamescoker1226 on 3/16/2015 7:13:50 PM with a score of 0

I hope you realize that the story is not supposed to be life changing. It's just for a short laugh. If there is grammar errors I apologize, mostly for your inability to move on and enjoy a joke.

— hamofpower on 3/16/2015 6:50:51 PM with a score of 0

Boring. Improve grammar and puncuation. Fr*cking terrible.

(On the bright side, I am in the Bahamas! Not getting arrested for public nudity and hijacking planes! WHOOOO!)

— WarriorCatsRPStories on 3/16/2015 6:45:16 PM with a score of 0