, #51 for
played 436 times (finished 116)
"walk in the park"
"Make sure not to blink"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Geared for Children
Hmm, this wasn't bad at all.
I liked that this quiz was given a narrative in pursuing a thief, it certainly made this much more exciting and immersive in that aspect instead of simply throwing out questions to be answered. So as something that's both educating and intriguing, this storygame did well enough in that aspect.
Though I'm not exactly sure as to which audience this is targeting, because I found this to be quite simple and the words themselves were words that weren't difficult, even less so with the hints that is given to the reader. I think that this storygame is probably a decent challenge for children, but this does end rather quickly.
I feel that this story would've benefited from having more choices in general, as the length for this storygame is rather short. But I do like the effort that was placed into making this a more interactive experience from the usual quiz, so bravo on that front.
on 3/13/2017 10:49:01 PM
A neat little story. Nice writing and use of pictures. As interactive fiction I feel this should be more fleshed out so that there are multiple branches including their own plotline instead of one choice that leads to a Try Again" link and the other continuing the story until it ends.
on 6/30/2015 2:28:29 AM
Too short, but the potential is there. This could have been an interesting game if more thought out.
on 6/17/2017 7:24:58 PM
It was okay. Using rare/longer/misused words might make the story even more interesting. Maybe longer, too. :). Cute little story.
on 1/12/2017 1:26:17 PM
This was nice. You have turned something that would've been totally boring into something fun!
on 1/12/2017 1:55:03 AM
This isn't second grade.
on 12/14/2016 12:11:00 AM
-- Short on 12/5/2016 8:47:52 AM
Well, that was dumb.
on 4/1/2016 4:46:16 PM
It was very easy. Good game for testing vocabulary.
on 6/30/2015 1:42:52 PM
Good job even though it was vocab
on 5/11/2015 1:09:21 PM
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