Player Comments on What I want to Be!
I haven't seen anything like this before on the site so you earn some points there. Unfortunately this hardly felt poetic, some of the lines appear to have been added only to make a rhyme and actually add no merit to the verse. I had hoped that when we chose an animal, for example, we would be brought through a nice page about being a frog. Then we would be able to choose what we do as a frog. Instead we get a series of choices as to what we are with no real consequences for choosing them. I want to be told what it would mean to be a green caramel frog. Length is a great thing to have, but I do not want it in this story if it just means more haphazardly connected pages. I want a poem about being a frog dadgummit. I don't want to tell you that I am a frog and then read some nonsensically strung together lines and suddenly be candy.
on 6/13/2015 1:24:54 PM
Boring. Sorry, but that’s the truth.
-- Penny on 4/13/2018 6:06:28 AM
Unique, and kept my interest for the short time that I played it. But I don't really see a point, besides just choosing random options of what you want to be, and the riddles very obvious. 4/8 though, 'cause it was short and entertaining.
on 6/21/2017 11:55:27 AM
I'm not sure what message this was trying to convey. First I'm a wolf, then I'm a lollipop, then I'm some tea.
Also, "defiantly" isn't used in that way. "Definitely" is the word you're looking for.
on 2/18/2017 10:22:19 AM
on 8/10/2016 11:07:51 PM
I liked it, it is amusing. Good job.
on 6/12/2016 6:47:36 PM
I don't think "shedded" is a word. :p
on 1/20/2016 6:46:36 AM
Wow, short, but fun.
on 6/5/2015 1:34:33 AM
It's not really a CYOA. As far as I can tell, the choices make no difference.
on 5/28/2015 11:40:02 AM
ironically I liked it
on 5/27/2015 4:54:31 PM
I really enjoyed that.
on 5/27/2015 9:42:29 AM
Haha.. I actually enjoyed this!
on 5/27/2015 12:09:33 AM
This was actually ok. It was quite good. An interesting concept but. . . Once again -can't stop myself- it is just too short. Make it longer please. Add about ten or more pages with creative poems and I promise to rate it a four of a five.
Give it more effort that's all.
on 5/25/2015 12:57:04 PM
Actually not bad, everyone says poems and stories for children are really easy to write but they're actually quite challenging. This is a pretty good one though it's not really a CYOS :)
on 5/24/2015 11:34:34 PM
well it is not a story.
on 5/24/2015 9:18:18 PM
Meh. Was this a real storygame? Kind of. But I'm not angry. The poem thing is pretty creative!
on 5/24/2015 7:56:23 PM
I really don't understand...
I'd also like to say something else: spend more than a few hours on each story. Notice how the best storygames could take a few months complete.
on 5/24/2015 7:14:23 PM