Zombie Mayhem

Player Rating4.99/8

"#174 overall, #21 for 2011"
based on 165 ratings since 05/10/2011
played 1,666 times (finished 168)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Zombies + Guns = FUN :-) I would appreciate any constructive criticism and suggestion that will help make the continuation of this game better. Thanks

Player Comments

This game does have potential, but it lacks a strong story. The combat system was pretty cool as it was somewhat similar to that of an RPG game. I feel that aspect is this game's strongest point, but it could use some improvements in other areas, mainly both the grammar and actual storytelling.

Proofreading would have went a long way in improving some aspects of the writing, because I found myself running into some issues with the grammar of this story. Also I'm aware that attempts to build suspense in certain scenes were made, but I think that those attempts were done poorly. Some pages could have used more words in general, and more of an attempt to show some emotion in the writing would've made this seem more inspired.

This game has a good system in place here, the combat system works out well and is fun for the most part. But it seems like things like story aspects take a backseat in the overall presentation of this storygame. I would recommend working harder to make all elements of your work to be equally as strong when compared to each other.

You show promise as a writer, but I would to see some effort. There's always room for growth and improvement after all.
-- TharaApples on 3/26/2017 10:31:04 PM with a score of 5
When does the second part come out it's so good!!
-- UndeadLover on 10/17/2017 10:15:24 AM with a score of 5
pretty good... and more storyline to it though
-- Speedotank on 12/15/2016 3:03:39 PM with a score of 5
Could be longer.
But otherwise great job!
-- Stormfeather on 11/25/2016 7:07:38 PM with a score of 5
Meh, could've been better
-- KingWario on 11/19/2016 6:39:50 PM with a score of 5
Good story can't wait for it to be continued :)
-- FourElemental on 11/7/2016 5:26:10 PM with a score of 5
A lot of fun. I like the interaction and the simple story.
-- crusader on 6/27/2016 5:20:19 PM with a score of 5
I mean, come on!! I finished it in like 4.5 minutes (no, not 45 mins, 4 point 5 mins hehe.) If the author makes part 2 and does a few extra things like: Making a new, much, much, much longer, deeper story. Keeping up or even increasing the humor. Having a bit better grammar. And creating an even better combat and scavenging system, then it would be a story worth reading. Not Bad for a first try (I presume). hehe!!
-- DarkScorpion on 4/19/2016 5:47:46 AM with a score of 5
Pretty funny, But really short, Woulda been heaps better if it went on for another hour or three, still, I like the concept of implementing a combat and HP system in it.
HmmHmmHmm...
-- DarkScorpion on 4/19/2016 5:35:02 AM with a score of 5
I thought it was great.
-- Zombie killer on 3/15/2016 9:34:36 AM with a score of 5
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