The world of Raydion is vast. its Lush forest, treacherous peaks, peaceful valleys and scorching deserts
make it home to many kinds of wildlife and intelligent creatures.
For the last century, the Elves from the west have ruled over most of the land on Raydion. their new emperor enjoys collecting rare creatures and displaying them in front of other elven nobles.

That is where you story begins. A lost soul chained and stripped for others enjoyment. Humiliated, beaten, mocked and chained. Life is bleak, empty devoid of meaning but, yet you live on, and will live on. Or, will you?

I'm for it but i'm pretty sure it whould be really hard to code in

to be honest, physical copies are better for a number of reasons.

1. If you are really absorbed in your book and it gets really late. Your parents won't tell you to stop because it is a book and not techology as they see it.

2. Have you ever tried reading anything off an Iphone(android smartphones in general), it hurts the eyes, the neck and overall is just a gigantic pain.

3. For the people who will say that you don't read on a smartphone but on a tablet or kindle. Here is my counter argument. You would say that we should pay upwards of 400$ for a table or kindle and then buy the book for 10 to 20$ just to be able to enjoy digitaly i say no to you sir.

But got to admit reading a CYOA in a paperback whould be a pain

but are you peruvian?

Well actually after reading it a really liked it. 

Then does that mean that Aman is pro (leprosy... le-PRO-sy) :p

I started working on a CYOA that i called Raydion here on the site. I am at my first branching of the story and i wanted to get some feedback on the story so far before continuing so i could change things before it got to complicated. I whould also appreciate if someon could tell me how to allow people to view unpublished games

I was going to read it but the big wall scared me

:p

I will simply record the history of the overworld from the sidelines. I mean< cough cough>

Mouhahahaha the world will burn to cinders. I shall collect your souls in the depts of hell!

Hrmrm God i hate doing that voice!

I see you have.

Oh, great mustashio! will you grant us hairy powers?

The practical aspect of this is for people who are active on several different threads. some people whould find it more practical then opening 20 tabs on their browser and refreshing them continuously