You are a private detective who received a note from an ex lover and set out to find her before the bad guys do. Pretty straight forward on this one.

Thanks for your suggestions and comments . As far the grammatical errors go I already know I'll have to I will have to proofread everything a couple times once I finish if not one two times before that. I will probably use your other suggestions so thank you very much. Another thing I made sure to to have at least one female in each of the taverns so you could have an all female party. I also made sure to have at least one male in each room cause I like to give people what they want. 

I just made my game "The Mercenary's tale." available for sneak  preview. If you can check it out and give me your feedback think about it or how it can be improved. I really want to know what you think of it as continue to work on it.  Keep in mind this is a work in progress and I'm still kind of new here. Enjoy and be nice.