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New Story

9 years ago

Okay, this one is more of a story than a game, and I`m not planning on having too much user interaction besides a couple desicions and maybe an action scene somewhere.  I`m not done yet, and currently the only thing You can do is `go with her`, but it would mean a lot if you could read through what I have so far and give me some feedback or ideas.  Thanks, and heres the link :) http://chooseyourstory.com/story/viewer/default.aspx?StoryId=23844

New Story

9 years ago

Whoops. But next time, please give us the link to the actual story, instead of the story viewer.