Welcome to the site! You spelled "grammar" wrong, but that's okay. Unfortunately, little of the work on here has proper grammar, and only about 10% of it is good. I recommend "The Order of the Midnight Sun" and "Mommy, Can I Go Out and Kill Tonight?" Those are my two favorites and have well grammar. Hehe. "The Tower" is also very good, but its grammar and spelling could use some work. Why am I writing a novel in a forum post again? I need to stop doing this, haha.
Welcome to the site.