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hey, dan, could you play my game? its not published yet, but I could email it to you or you could just go in and play it. You could do that right?

Well, I just wanna know what u think. Its AWESOME!

ESRT

Hi ESRT! Mr. March5th00 is aparantly incredibly busy so I took the liberty of checking out Unholy King. So far, I like it, it really feels like an "adventure game" as opposed to choose your own adventure (which is a good thing). I didn't have a chnace to make it all the way through the game (it turns out I'm incredibly busy myself ;-).

However, here's a few suggestions for the long term -- add more descriptions to the pages, all of them are very short and really dont get the reader/player involved in the plot line. additionally, pictures would be nice, although I know they are hard to find**. At least have pictures for the items, it's a lot better than the lame default picture (which, for the life of me, I can't figure out why is still in use).

Other than that, I think that's it. As far as play goes, its exciting and has a lot of potential. Best of luck and I look forward to seeing the final result!

alexp

** If it's any consolation, we are working on a picture library to use as soon as possible.

Well, how far did you get? o and, I told you, Its not finished yet. But, I am going through and adding those pictures for the items, but it is hard. Billy has been making some for me lately. Where did you get in my game?

Thanks for the suggestions.