After learning from all your suggestions and comments for my first story, I have completed my second one, Fan Fic: Where in the World Is Carmen Sandiego?
http://chooseyourstory.com/Story/Fan_Fic_0x3a__Where_in_the_World_Is_Carmen_Sandiego_0x3f_.aspx
As always, feel free to leave comments, suggestions, errors, etc. I am always open to hearing how I can improve.
Have at it!
