It's short and it shouldn't be looked at like one of the better stories on this site.
I'm going to continue it and all but tell me what you think of it . http://myadventuregame.com/Story/The_school_is_yours!.aspx
It's pretty good, but by continue it do you mean add on to it or write a sequal? If you are going to unpublish later and change it, you might want to talk to 3J about adding a demo tag.
Wait bo, your not going to complain about the grammer errors? lol
I've been virtually yelled at on several occasions...
LOL (for real out loud) who?
Well, I used yelled at for effect, but I was chewed out by both you and 3J, and I'd be surprised if more people didn't do it.
Oh, ok im sorry but, thats pretty funny.