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Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

The day the power went, was not a good one.  There are now savages roaming the streets, cannibals lurking around every corner.  You must adapt to every new situation and survive the new world.

This is a message board about my game that is currently in development.  Feel free to play the demo that is available, and give feedback that will make Intrepid better.

 

NOTE: There is currently no set release date.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

I'd like a little more background info, and this would be more appropriately placed in the Writing Workshop, where people actually wanting to help will be at.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Thanks for your help, and if you would like more background info, I would love to give it to you.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Great, just PM me.

Intrepid - A not so boring Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

And if I could have some details, perhaps I could provide some suggestions as well.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

There has been a good portion of the beginning of the game completed, and because of this I think the full game will be completed soon.

Intrepid - A not so boring game by Boringfirelion.

11 years ago

Great!

But I would recommend doing a proof read first, for spelling/grammar as well as story continuity.
If further elaboration is needed for combat scenes, you know who to ask.

Intrepid - A not so boring game by Boringfirelion.

11 years ago

Alright, thanks!

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Alright, so now I will be taking any suggestions to improve my game.  Play the demo first to understand how the game is layed out.

In Triffids - That Game About Stuff

11 years ago

*laid!

Anyway, sure thing. Just post a juicy link on this thread and we can praise and criticise away.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Alright, I have finished many parts of the game.  I will need some "helpers" for this part of Intrepid.  Feel free to PM me.  I will also PM other members, to test out what I have finished so far.  You may also request to test this game out also, although you probably won't be accepted, if I do not know and/or trust you.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Branching the game off into different locations.  Adding confrontations to zombies also, and there is a different storyline being developed.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Estimated time to finish:  Two to three months.

Yeah, sorry for the wait.  I hope you all will like it though, because I've worked really hard on this.  I am developing a complex storyline, and I just have to say -- I love the variables for this site!

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Wow... I apologize.  Major setback, and will have to be working longer than expected.  Stick around, play the demo:

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/intrepid-%28demo%29

And tell me what you think!

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Updated demo to have... A BONUS SCENE!  It is straight from the full game, just altered the link structure a bit for it to make sense.

Intrepid - A Game by Boringfirelion

11 years ago

Demo Link:
 

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/intrepid-(demo)-~2dbonus-scene~2d