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Site 59: No Escape

9 years ago
Well, it's done. I am needing help with the proofreading, though. A couple people originally offered but are busy with their own ambitions and/or lives at the moment. I have been trying to do it myself, but I keep missing mistakes as I am reading what I wanted it to say rather than what's actually written. Ugh.

So anyways, anyone out there interested in helping me proofread?? I'm anxious to hurry up and publish it, so y'all can sample my writing without impossible 10 day deadlines or having to include puzzles/riddles for a certain contest, lol. I spent a total of two months writing this one. Someone plz help me out, please!?! I'm actually begging here.... *sigh*

Site 59: No Escape

9 years ago
Here is a link to the story: Site 59: No Escape Your comments and feedback are welcome as I take my writing very seriously...

Site 59: No Escape

9 years ago

Hmm... Liked what you did with it, but found the dark grey a little hard on the eyes with the black text. Not saying it needs changes, but just pointing it out for consideration next time.

Site 59: No Escape

9 years ago
Thanks, Berka! I will make sure my next one is easier to read. I wanted that one to feel dark...

Do you think I should finish my zombie one next or do the other one about the stalker? I'm torn, lol.

Site 59: No Escape

9 years ago

I'm the wrong one to ask about finishing any stories right now haha! Got Dungeon Stompage II & Bane Treasure of the Vampire King on eternal hold right now.

Just work on whichever one interests you more at the time and let them finish themselves as the words come together on the pages. :)