"Don't be afraid," said your mother. Blood formed beads on her face and her tears formed pools of agony. The image of war, the sudden urge to kill, has never been so potent. This is a story that informs you that not all stories have a happy ending. Based in Afghanistan, story created for Endmaster's culture clash contest, and we intend to expand the story after that is over.

We apologize for the bad grammar, we ran out time to proofread. Feel free to tear it apart and we hope you have fun reading it! (For fun you can try to guess which parts stargirl wrote and which parts Abgeofriends wrote)

You play as the new Empress Vira in the kingdom of Magnicollis with her horse Cupcake. Your mother has just died and you have to take the crown. Stay loyal to your horse and try not to kill everyone in your kingdom... or do. 

This is an entrey for Endmaster's prompt contest. I got the prompt "A story of a lunatic empress... with a fondness for horses." I didn't spend very much time writing it and I didn't have time to proofread, but hopefully it's still decent enough to be enjoyable. 

Just writing things when I'm bored. Putting it here because it's the only good writing site, and I might change this into an actual story later. :)

Just a fun little project for when I'm bored. Experimenting with poetry.

Yay! Looking at all the comments, I definitely should have proofread it. I think I was in a rush that day or something. Oh well, at least I still won!

Nice job to Goodnight_a as well. She might not have beat me, but her story was still nicely done and had way less grammar issues than mine. 

I did this instead of my homework.  

Imagine not having spring break right now. 

Yeah, I'm not sure how that happened. lol

How long will the voting period last? 24 hours? A week? I'm just curious. 

I just spent ten minutes writing what I thought was a great continuation of my already 1,000 words before I looked over it and realized that after the first two sentences I had started writing it in second person out of force of habit. To be honest, I've done that for a school assignment more than once and have had to redo parts of it five minutes before it was due. I find that whenever I get into a scene in my writing that I switch it to second person subconsciously because second person is most of what I write in my free time now. Don't know if any of the rest of you have that problem, but it's quite annoying. 

Thanks!

Take some comfort in knowing that I'm not even sure what a love triangle is. I'll look it up when I get home and am not on my school google account, just in case. 

I would totally buy those. 

As long as it's good writing then I don't really mind. The writing does have to really good though, like Mizal said, to still earn a high rating from me. A medium story with good branching is probably around the same rating as a great story with little to no branching imo.