A Lost Home

A fantasy storygame by Agrusar

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 4 ratings so far

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level3/8

"Must be at least this tall to play"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Player Comments

Try to avoid first page end game links, those are anoying. Give the story more than five pages, then we can realy know rather or not its worth expanding. The thing is, if you can finish a story, it was worth writing. Your first finished story, good or not is your stepping stone to your next story.

— ugilick on 8/7/2011 10:53:33 PM with a score of 0

I don't really think you can judge a 5-page story. I would expand it before asking it to be judge.