Choose a door

I'd like for you to consider the choices here. You said 'run away' when I got to the wooden door. Why would I want to run away? Wouldn't that just end the game or set me back the last step? You need to think about this further to please your audience. Right now, on a scale from 1 to 10, your audience is about....2/10 pleased. The riddle was the same, but people have still enjoyed reading it again in a different style.

I recommend you to think up different riddles and maybe make a story behind this. Maybe a boy is stuck in the castle and sees a way out but it has a code and this is the code? See? It makes the story way more interesting. For more on the "story-quiz" type, check out "Trapped in the Tower of Hanoi" if you can find it.

Good job, really. Although, first-timers can leave a lasting effect on the CYS community. Strive for that.

And if you're telling me that I'm new, believe me, I'm not. Since 2014, I think. Published three games...I'm working on the fourth!

Just saying, you could have made this much more interesting by taking a little bit from the "quiz" element and inserting the "story" element in its place. More people would enjoy this if you had done what you thought what everyone would like.

It was a good start but I have heard this riddle many times

Eh,It's good for a first quiz and all i like it,but could you give the reason behind why everyone must commit suicide,and who tells them this

It's kind of an old riddle (if you would even call it that). Not really mysterious, just a bunch of random clicking and then winning the game. However, it's a good start. Keep trying. 3/8

I always leave good and bad points about stories so I'll jump right into that.

Bad: It was very very short and there were grammar problems right from the first sentence.

Good, It was a first story and I can definitely see what you were trying to do, this was like some old riddles I used to like. sadly it does not translate quite as well to the written form. It all worked though and it might still catch some people out if they were not paying attention.

Keep trying. go for something longer next time now that you know you can use the system. Put in more writing and check spelling/grammar and all will be happier

Too short to be any challenging, because it was really easy to remember what was on the first page. Good idea, although this is a pretty common riddle to stumble upon.

Keep writing!

That's one of the oldest jokes in the book. I would know, because I wrote it. XD

This riddle has been told many times.... please use another non-told riddle for your next riddle. Thank you.

I don't think there is a single person alive who hasn't seen this or a similar riddle.