I am an avid reader of Young Adult vampire romances so expect to find all kinds of cliche adolescent angst and puberty issues in this story. There are three types of vampires in this world--healthy vamps, Discontented vamps (not so healthy) and hyper Discontented vamps (new kind of extremely unhealthy vamps). It's my very first story game so I'd appreciate as much constructive criticism as you can think of.