FNAF The first night!

This is worse then my storygames, and that's saying a lot. This is short, easy, bad spelling, and even boring! I think most things are exciting, so i think you just should look at storygames, not make them.

Time for the best part of your game! At least for me.

<Not responsible for injury/dismeberment.>
You know it's gonna be fun when you see that.

<Just gonna cross that out because thats probably not gonna be a thing after tonight...>
Guess what it was? That's right! Giving a rating higher than 4 on this game!

<A Purple Body looms over your head. He is holding a Freddy Fazbear Suit. Think fast!>
Dave! Weren't you supposed to be stabbing children tonight?

<I DID IT!!!! >
Or did I? I'm using the knife!

<Item cannot be used here.>
Dangit! Worked earlier!

I feel like this review should be longer...

Too short, linear, needs proofreading, and punishes logical choices.

1/8.

Played again, it was sad, sorry guys

He crossed out the world live, because he found out the animatronics move, and he smelled the stench of dried blood, (forgot to add that sorry)

That was pretty awesome! I LIVED!!!!!

Aside from minor spelling mistakes, it just sort of jumped into it right away without any sort of story or explanation of what's going on. My character doesn't even seem that bothered.

"You cross out 1 word... Live Just gonna cross that out because thats probably not gonna be a thing after tonight"

What? Why? Why would he think that? He had no reason to.

Wait, why did our character right out the word 'live' and cross it out, exactly?

This was way too short for a game or a story.

Pretty good. I SURVIVED!!!!!!!!! Any others?