Get Rachel Home Safe

A modern storygame by nycprettytay

Player Rating2.67/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 14 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

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Potential, yet poor use of choices. Liked the way you write, and build your story.

Sadly since it´s quite linear, i can´t give it more than a 2/8.

— SilverFlame1995 on 2/8/2013 4:49:45 PM with a score of 0

I found it rather unsatisfying to actually get Rachel home safe. Also, you called her Ashley at one point.

— Loon on 2/8/2013 12:01:43 PM with a score of 0

Well, your writing is not too bad, but you need a better storyline with some real choices.

— Xt1000305 on 2/7/2013 11:20:04 AM with a score of 0

Very insightful! Women are always taught not to get in a car with strange men because they might try to rape them or something, but it's good see a story that teaches men not to pick up strange girls because they might try to... Rape their wives apparently. Drunk women do that all the time, right? :p

Get Rachel Home Safe

Player Rating2.67/8

Story Difficulty2/8

Play Length4/8

Maturity Level5/8

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