Missing in Action

This was a very well written short story. It was entertaining and kept my attention throughout.

From the start, you can tell that this story is well written. The characters were pretty well developed and react logically within the narrative. Grammar, structure, and spelling are done well. And the story is paced in a way to keep you interested.

This story does fall a bit short when looked at in a CYA format. There were a couple of early endings based upon choices, but many of the selections that should be meaningful just fed back into the same narrative stream. Getting lost in a cave can open up so many different possibilities that would have been fun to be able to explore. However, though it seemed the author was pushing towards a single path, in many cases these choices allowed the characters more screen time for a longer story.

Overall, an entertaining and well written short story that is definitely worth reading.

A nice little story. enjoyable to play/read.

doing anything is better than homework

Would be better without cuss words.

It was good, not the best but very good.

It's a good story but there's no real danger in the climax but the tension is there though. 6/8

your work was really good just add some thing more fun:)

it was a little boring ,but fun:)

Amazing work

Really well written.