Okay guys, this is my first game, so by all means don't go easy on me or I'll never learn!
It's is a lightly worded modern fantasy story that takes place in an altered version of our own world. With any luck, it'll turn out just fine by the time I'm finished. Right now, it's pitifully short. I just want to make sure I'm on the right track before I dive right into it.
Please, let me know what you liked, disliked, any bugs you come across and of course all the inevitable spelling and gramatical mistakes I have made. Thanks! :)
